Reviews for The Alone Place

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Eerie Iri 2008-04-26 ch 1,	abuseThis was very good! At first I thought it would be Grimlock, but Swoop/Arcee is great too!
Paineater 2008-03-10 ch 1,	abusePrimus, I can't believe I almost cried after reading this. It's just a wonderful fanfic. Nothing, NOTHING is OOC (which is rare, mind you). Love the story dearly.
Yami-Yugi3 2008-02-04 ch 1,	abuseAw that's soo sweet. ^_^
Philip Gipson 2008-01-21 ch 1, anon.	abuseA "Transformers" love story...who could ask for anything more? The romantic relationship between Arcee and Dinobot Swoop was handled very well. Other Autobots give them the cold shoulder, even Springer. This new tale not only focuses on Arcee and Swoop; it may also give the Autobots and Dinobots the chance to interact a little more. They never really did that a lot on the Sunbow cartoon, but fate had other things to do. What a shame. I'm anxious to see your final "Harry Potter/TF" story. Hope to see it up soon.
srg1 2008-01-19 ch 1, anon.	abuseThis was pretty good! The pairing was a surprise, but it works great! I hope a sequel can appear. I wonder if Grimlock would be more into the idea of Arcee and Swoop being together if they were the parents of future dinobots. It would be cute to see little dinobots running around, of course Prowl and Ratchet would be shocked at that. Wheeljack probably would be thrilled. I can't wait to read what you have next!
enderverse 2008-01-18 ch 1,	abuseI don't know any of these characters or what series this is but its still a great story. thats a sign of a great author that you make it obvious whats happening without taking a paragraph to explain it before hand.
eeyop1428 2008-01-18 ch 1,	abusewow, that pairing was a real surprise - i never expected a dinobot to be with anyone hehe. at first i thought it was wheeljack, and that was surprising enough! but you did a really great job with it though, i'm very impressed with this. it's great how you brought the issue of the relationship between the dinobots and the rest of the autobots up in an informing way. there are so many involving strained relationships like that - thanks for bringing that up :) i thought the kiss scene was so sweet - to me, it was a genuine and natural kiss, not like a kiss that doesn't seem real, but was innocent like a first kiss is supposed to be :"...clumsy and awkward..." to sum up: this was an excellent story. and i think you did great with a romantic genre. funny how this story reminds me of Romeo and Juliet hehe :)
lilyoftheval5 2008-01-18 ch 1,	abuseThanks for the warning. That's one contest who entries I'm going to avoid. Because if they are all like this - a well-presented relationship that, as a given, will not work out.And left me wanting for more... No thank you.
tomorrow4eva 2008-01-17 ch 1,	abuseWow, good one. I really liked that story. Good characterisation, good pace. I like how you fleshed out a lot of characters there. I found the story very believable, which is always nice in TF love stories.
Jason M. Lee 2008-01-17 ch 1,	abuseAw. Wonderful setup and break up between the most unlikely 'bots. I like the image of Swoop with the swallows on his wings. :3
the-human-error 2008-01-17 ch 1,	abuseXD I LOVE this story, all the characters are so well written :) I could imagine ** end up smashing the controler if he lost :P Keep up the good work :)
cmdrtekk 2008-01-17 ch 1,	abuseThis was a great story!
Cafcow 2008-01-17 ch 1,	abuseThat was a great story! I loved Swoop and Arcee. Wonderful job. ]:3
AyameKitsune 2008-01-17 ch 1,	abuseGrins I like this fic! ^_^ I can't wait to read what you write next! ^_^
Dreamchylde 2008-01-17 ch 1,	abuseI think this worked out perfectly for the contest. I hope you win -grin-

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