I cannot even tell you how much the following line made me giggle!

<<DG grinned up at Cain. "So, Sir Wyatt. Are you ready to do your duty and risk your toes in service to the Crown?"

Excellent so far and I'm looking forward to the remaining chapters!

Wow! I didn't know that little tidbit about Russ Tamblyn. To be able to do the axe-handles jump thing that he did in "Seven Brides for Seven Brothers" at the age of 53 is just amazing!

("Seven Brides for Seven Brothers" is one of my all time favorite musical/movie!

Great story! I love happily-ever-afters!

"Like Ferengi in goddamned green suits!”

OMG - a Star Trek reference -- and used so hysterically!! You are truly my hero and favorite author now!! LOL!!

“It’s a Who-ville parade through emerald-colored-glasses,”

OMFG!! That is so freakin' hysterical -- had me in tears with that mental picture!! This was another great chapter and I am so looking forward to reading the rest!!

So sweet, I loved it when she stood up for Cain, great scene.

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I love this! I think it's one of the best examples of Tin Man fic where the characters are accurately portrayed! Also, I love your attention to detail, like the dancing and the outfits. I know a dance that sounds a lot like your Jump Dance so that was fun to read about. (I've heard it called Wench Toss :D )

I like happily ever afters. Great story!

Aw, DG stood up for her man! I hope their talk goes smoothly.

Ha! That was a funny way for DG to admit that she thinks Cain is hot. I'm off to read more of this story.

Aww, what a cute ending! I loved it! Great job on the story, it was awesome!

What? That was the end? Don't get me wrong--it was lovely. I just want more! LOL. Excellent fic. I really can't say enough good things about it. Memorable, unique, and fascinating the entire way through. Thanks for sharing!

Em

i like the use of seven brides for seven brothers. good movie, and great scene. I especially love how you had Cain do one last jump in the end of the chapter. great story so far.

I love everything about this story. It's the perfect length, too!

I think Sam Elliot's a perfect choice for Johnson.