Aw! I'm really sad this one is over!

Ya know i think this is the first Chris Jericho story i have actually read and really liked!

Great writing anyway! Would love to read the story of Ellie and Cena or Candice and Randy if you ever got the chance though ;)

Thanks for sharing!

Suzi

Damn I loved This story I Can't Wait for The Squeal I Look on here Everyday to see if there is one Yet. I wanna See What happens Between Charlotte and Chris.

I cannot believe we’re at the end! Wow! As always, you are more welcome for any help I’ve been able to give. I do it because I enjoy doing so and because you are such a dear friend. It’s an honor for me for you to seek my advice and help in the first place. Btw, I have to comment on the warning: (Why you'd want to though, is beyond me! )—LOL! You are so funny.

Now to the final chapter (pout). I can see how that kiss was easy persuasion to leave for the hotel. ^_^ Love this exchange: “Have fun, and don't do anything I wouldn't,” replied Paulo with a smirk. “Oh, I have every intention of doing plenty you wouldn't,” “Chris is in for some night, huh?” So funny: “Night, Randy and Candy.” “Don't you ever refer to us as that again,” I’m a blubbering idiot when it comes to replying to that display of sexual satisfaction. Hot damn! Buh, buh, yeah. . .that was good stuff. “After four years of searching for her Knight in shining armour, Charlotte had finally found what she'd been looking for – when in reality it had been there all along - and she couldn't be happier.”—Beautiful! I was thinking about how far this fic has come, how far almost all of the characters have come. I love how you’ve drawn out all of the transformations from beginning to end. Great work! I can’t wait for the sequel. All in all, another awesome fic, sweetheart!

Firstly I would like to say many congrats on the final chapt to such a wonderful, enthralling and fun-packed story as Charlotte no longer has to worry being on the singles market! It may be over but these chapters including this one has worked a treat!
It was as you called it Deliciously Purfect, with Charlotte and Chris embraced in each others arms towards the end. It leaves you with such a wonderful feeling and glad that everything has turned out great for her including her friends the divas and the other superstars icluding Jeff, who I admit sounded rather cute in his scene with Paulo!
It definately was a night to remember and it sure wasn't just the hype of the New years Eve party! :-D *Wink, wink*
Terrific job throughout!! It makes you realize that there is someone for anyone out there! Plus I'm happy as everyone else to hear that there's a sequel to 'There All Along!'
Many thanks and hope to see another one of your incredible fics, inclusing the sequal, take your time , best of luck with those new stories and again hope to hear from you soon!
It has been a fantastic journey! :-D

-Laura AKA-(Rheya-Goddess)

P.S: In your recent Review post I didn't know that Chris' band actually did a cover of 'Genie in a Bottle'!? Really? If so then that's an awsome fact!

On the WWE so far he's turned into a heel for some time now, I'm not affected by it (No Way!)I mean he must be great guy a loving husband and father in real life, I'm just disappointed that the fans have gone to dislike him, I mean where have all the 'Jericholics' gone? After his recent fued w/ Shawn Michaels had he been in for some rough rides! (Ouch!)

That was really great...After all that time waiting for that and here it is :P You know what I mean (wink,wink) haha


Anyway...I almost cry reading the last chapter can´t believe that is over now! What when I read that you were posting some other story or the sequel too I was really excited! I LOVE your stories...They make my day better!

Loves and Kisse from a fan of your work!

Maria

Wonderful, I think you pulled it off perfectly. I'm not just talking about the smut, either, although I did love that!

Anyway, good job. I'm eagerly anticipating the sequel. I'll have to move you onto author alert now so that I don't miss updates on future stories.

Wow... i think after writing this review i need to go and get some water... well make that a lot of water because this chapter was so hot :D... Aww the story is over now but i'll be happy when the sequal comes out whenever it does:D... Wow and here i thought i was still recovering from Monday night and the fact that Jericho looked so damn hot and his cute smiles... yes i know he's a heel and he's supposed to have ppl against him but DAMN when he smiled... at that moment i had forgotten that he was one. Well congrats on a story well done and i can't wait to see what u cook up next.

Wow, just wow. As sad as I am to see this story complete itself, that was the perfect ending. I look forward to the sequel. Congratulations on such a wonderful, thrilling fic. Good luck with the next one ;)

aw omg cutest ending ever... i dont know wat else to say but please write my love life haha.. lol im kidding.. greast story i loved it :D :D :D :D

Heyy. Awesome Story. Please Update Soon.

I'm terribly sad to see the story has ended but I'm so happy for Charlotte and Chris. I'm slightly jealous of the woman. Thanks for the great story.

Hope to see a new story soon.

A great ending to a great story. I loved it. I hope to see more of your work soon.

Aw, poor Charlie. She was already nervous and a bit scared about the meeting with Valerie Ford and telling Chris her feelings, and then she just happened to overhear Chris telling Layla that he wasn't ready to date yet. She'd been so nervous and apprehensive about her feelings as it was, which is partly why Charlie wanted to wait and see exactly what she felt before she confessed it to Chris. She didn't want to come off looking like a fool, especially if he didn't feel the same way. It's just rotten luck that she heard Layla say that to Chris before she had a chance to tell him her feelings. Poor girl :( On a side note, I'm glad to see that things seem to be changing for Beth and Charlie.

Back to the Chris and Layla situation..Charlie shouldn't jump to conclusions. With the way the two of them have hit it off, and the chemistry they have, how could Chris not feel the same way she does? How could he not be ready to date? It was a natural reaction for Charlie to think that maybe he didn't want to be with her, but she should also consider that he might have just said that to Layla to let her down gently. Charlie doesn't have to worry--Chris does have feelings for her. He wouldn't toy with her emotions like that, and I think that, deep down, she knows Chris better than that. But she must be heartbroken at what she heard. No wonder she snapped at Chris like that.

Chris has no idea what's going on, and I think that Charlie should have told him. Now he's in the dark as well, and it will probably hurt his feelings. Hopefully the two of them can work it out soon, but maybe it's best for Charlie to be away from Chris for a little bit, so that she can clear her head.

Thankfully, Charlie's got some great friends and an amazing sister to comfort her. Their love and support was exactly what she needed. We should all be so lucky to have friends like that.
When Ellie said “Okay, but how do you know Chris wasn't just saying that to put Layla off? Maybe he does feel the same way about you, and if you were just honest with him and told him how you feel, he would want a relationship too?", she was right on the money. Everyone's seen how Chris and Charlie are when they are around each other, which is something Charlie needs to think about. Chris just isn't the kind of person to fake feelings for someone or blow them off. It's not in his nature.

Thank you for an amazing chapter!

Tina

I figured that I would go ahead and review this chapter first, and then go back and catch up with the ones I haven't reviewed. Before I start, I have to say that this is one of the best stories I've read in a long time, and I'm going to be so sad when it ends. I have enjoyed reading it though, and I'm really excited about the sequel! I know it will be good.

Anyway, on to the review. The New Year's Party is something I've been waiting to read ever since it was first discussed, just because I wanted to see who would hook up on that night. Ellie's been after Cena for a while, and seeing her nervous and Charlotte being a great big sister really made me smile. I don't have one, so I've never known what it feels like, but I've always wanted a sister. But Ellie was really nervous about what John would think of her. As Charlotte pointed out, John's comment about hoping to get a kiss from Ellie at midnight is definitely a hint that he might want to get together with Ellie. We'll see how that turns out in the future, but I definitely smell the beginning of something. What it is, I'm not sure, but I'm thinking that Ellie and Cena are going to (hopefully) end up like Charlie and Chris.

Charlie's a beautiful girl. I'm sure that even if she hadn't gone all out to get dressed up, it wouldn't have mattered to Chris. But her outfit and makeup was absolutely stunning! Definitely a knockout. Chris is lucky he has her on his arm, because all the guys, like Orton, would be all over her if she wasn't with him. Not that that would stop Orton...

I'm glad to see that Maria and Josh's relationship is still going strong. It can be really hard to maintain long-term relationships, but she really is happy with Josh, and I'm glad they still are together. Where it will lead, I'm not sure, but it's nice to see Maria happy as well.

I really like how you took the time to go into detail with what everyone was wearing. It really allowed me to picture it in my head and I like that. I always try to envision the characters in my head, and when the writer gives the reader more to work with, that's always a good thing. And, by the way, were you TRYING to cause me to faint with the description of Chris and what he was wearing? Dear Lord...I thought I was going to drool all over my keyboard. LOL. But seriously, Chris was definitely looking smokin' (when does he NOT?), and if I'd been Charlie, I would have been trying my hardest not to ravage him right there in the lobby.

I still think it is so adorable that Chris calls Charlie "Princess". Lucky girl...I hate her, LOL. Their relationship is definitely solid right now, and I'm glad to see that Charlie's overcome her fears about getting into a serious relationship. There seems to be a lot of strong feelings there, and not just in the sex department, either. They really do love each other. But the steaminess of their relationship is something I really do enjoy reading about. Chris completely naked? *dies* Sorry.

Poor guy...Charlie was getting him all excited and then she just pulled away from him right as it was getting started. I know she didn't mean to, but still..he's definitely going to make her do something to make it up to him later, LOL. I actually felt sorry for Chris at that moment.

I had to laugh at the bad timing that Charlie and Chris were having! It seemed that, every time they tried to pick up where they left off, someone or something interrupted them. No wonder Chris was getting so...frustrated. I would have been getting frustrated too. I don't know how Charlie was able to resist those puppy-dog eyes.

EP, Chris attacking Charlie as she was coming from the restroom? I love the lustfulness and the sexual tension coming from these two, and I especially love how you kept building it up throughout the chapter. When they do get back to the hotel room, they're going to tear each other apart. Well, if they can manage to restrain themselves until then, that is. Charlie grabbing the bulge in Jericho's pants made me giggle. I don't know why, but it just did :)

Dirty dancing to "Genie in a Bottle" with Chris? Now I really do hate Charlie, LOL. I really thought you did a great job writing that scene..you seemed to be really comfortable doing it. I've always wanted to branch into actual sex scenes, or even just ones like this one, where Charlie and Chris were dirty dancing, but I'm not sure I could portray all the proper emotions. That was definitely a heated moment for them. Chris was just giving Charlie a taste of her own medicine. Her reaction was quite funny. It's like "No!" But I suppose now she knows how Chris felt earlier that night.

The ending of the chapter was perfect. Not only did you tie everyting together and prepare the readers for the final chapter, but you also showed how much Charlie's life had changed in such a short time. At the beginning of the story, I had no clue that Chris and Charlie would hit it off so well and be at the point they are at now. The year's kind of been like a roller-coaster ride for Charlie, with extremely high points (like the stage she is at in her relationship with Chris) and extremely low ones (the disasterous date with Ryan, fighting with Beth, and worrying about whether or not Chris really wanted to be with her). Charlie had become this really tough girl, afraid of falling in love again, and not wanting to open up her heart to a guy after what had happened with Dylan. Then she met Chris, and he slowly was able to show her that she could love again. And now here they are. I bet that Charlie never thought that she would find love with someone she met in a snack room, who teased her about her taste in novels. I'm so glad they finally got together and realized their feelings for each other. Yeah, it took some time, but in the end, it's been worth it. Better to take your time than to rush into something.

Amazing chapter. I seriously thought I was going to cry at the sweetness of it at the end. I simply adore this and have enjoyed reading each chapter. The end is making me sad. Great job =) You've kept me enthralled thus far.

Tina

FANTASIC hands down! Clare this chapter has seemed to answer any questions I had of these adorable couples, and what an incredible idea to pair them on the coundown to New Years Eve!
The opening gave me giggles along with killer jokes and the girls trying not to get too 'tipsy' whilst sharing rounds of champaign before celebrating, i think it's lovely how you've put it out as a New Year's Eve tradition for Charlotte and her friends to drink the French wine every year when they celebrated the holiday. And that it allowed the group of companions to reflect on the twelve months just gone, and discuss their hopes and dreams for the coming year.
Great fun to read at the chosen venue! Charlotte was really sweet looking out for such a feiry woman as Melina, and Chris sounded amazing with his foxy rock-star attire! Is that man a Sexy Beast or what? Those two sure as hell couldn't keep their hands off each other before the clock struck midnight! Maybe Nelly's song *It's getting Hot in Here* should be playing in the background! But I love Aguilera's *Genie in a bottle*, great how you've played the song in theme with the couples dancing!
Anyway, just to finish off i'm happy that Kelly and Candice had found someone before New Years! Love the Kelly Kelly Kennedy and Randy and Candy terms! As so for Paulo and Jeff and John Cena and Ellie! That would have a been a New Years Eve no girl would want to forget! Just one chapter left (sobs), the party's nearly over? I thought it has just got started! Well that won't stop me from reading this wonderful fic over and over again!! :-D