Reviews for There All Along

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littleone999 2008-07-22 ch 22,	abusewoohoo...that was great! can't wait for new years now..lol
annskieesofresh 2008-07-21 ch 22,	abuseeek! YAY! FINALLY, Charlie and Chris got together. :) awesome chappy! looking forward to the next and cant wait. :)
Disco Inferno1 2008-07-21 ch 22,	abuseLove the description of the scenery at the beginning. Great line: “Jeez, if all I had to do to get that type of attention from you was grow fur and a tail, I'd have tried long ago.” After all this, she might as well be part of the family b/c that’s exactly how Jericho’s family treated her. I know I wouldn’t mind be part of this family—they’re great. Then again it would have to be as Jericho’s significant other b/c he is way too damn precious and perfect in this chapter. “Nah-ha,” protested Abby. “I'm going to be a make up artist, like Charlie.”—uh, oh, Charlotte’s got Abby around her finger. ^_^ Of course, I can see her looking up to Charlotte’s ‘glamorous’ lifestyle with her own mother more absent than present. And what a set-up by Abby on Jericho and Charlotte. Kudos to that girl for being so smart. And the kiss—sigh. . .I’ve got nothing to say because there’s nothing that can be added to that awesome scene. Great chapter!
Disco Inferno1 2008-07-21 ch 21,	abuseKids have such a way of complicating things—Charlotte just can’t say ‘no’ to Abby. You would think, what could it hurt to go on to Canada and then think about what to do about Jericho’s response to Layla? But going runs the risk of her falling harder for him. However, not going is shutting down any possibility of them ever being together. So, yeah, going is probably the best decision. Now of course, if Charlotte knew what Jericho confessed to the girls (whoohoo), then going is obviously the best decision. ^_^ In regards to Beth and Charlotte, it’s amazing how little things can be misconstrued and then blow up into major issues. “You know Charlotte will never do anything about the situation on her own. It's our duty as her best friends to intervene.”—that sums up these girls completely. ^_^ On to the trip, whoohoo!!
AshMattXoXo 2008-07-21 ch 22,	abuseOMGOMGOMGOMG... They are finally together, the moment I always wanted! It´s finally here!! I love when Abby made Charlie and Chris read the Harry and Ginni scene of the book...She really wants them together hahaha! Maria aka AshMattXoXo (Fan of your stories) =)
Rheya-Goddess 2008-07-21 ch 22,	abuseWOW! Clare, you couldn't have captured a brilliant moment between those two...that was MAGICAL!! Hops up and down in delight! Incredibly wonderful and moving with Charlotte's emotions on Chris's kiss (Personally I find guys with facial hair are always hot! Despite the scratchy feeling though!) Giggles You've captured the moment of bliss perfectly! It's emough to make any fireworks blasting into the night sky as well as leaving you in a sweat of excitement!! Love the scenery of Winnipeg, to the fair and the sweet home of Jericho's family, in which you make it sound so wonderful like Charlotte's own. You make Abby sound incredibly cute after taking a sip of her daddy's beer and her wanting those Harry Potter scenes rea-acted! Maybe she was trying to a be quite the little match-maker there, I dunno, anyways great that those two had a ball, yet Charlie's to come back to Jackson, we'll have to see were her heart takes her if she and Chris are now officaly a couple! Thanks Clare, you've made my day with this update! Take care, as always your work is stunning! Looking foreward to the next! :-) -Laura
chnoelle 2008-07-21 ch 22,	abuseAWESOME! SO CUTE SQUEALS I love the ending to this chapter. You are simply amazing.
SummerRain173 2008-07-20 ch 22,	abusethis is the cutest chapter yet... do u want to write my life for me lol jk... but yeah... i hope u update again soon :D:D love this story
Westfan 2008-07-20 ch 22,	abuseAH! Yay, it's about time! Go Charlie! I'm so happy for her and Chris, those two plus Abby make the cutest family. I love the Harry Potter reading scene btw, very clever of little Abby. This really was wonderful. I can't wait to see what happens next!
jeffhardyfan722 2008-07-20 ch 22,	abuseDamn it's hot in here! That was a hot freakin chapter babe! I loved the kiss scene...so sweet, just as I imagined it.
Fozzy-Floozy 2008-07-20 ch 22,	abuseLOVE IT... Finally! Great chapter...
Wildflower082 2008-07-19 ch 22,	abuseFinally! Great update! Love where the story is going!
nicole 2008-07-19 ch 22, anon.	abusevery good. finally those two have gotten together i cant wait for laya's reaction. this is going to be good. great job. i cant wait for the next chapter great job. please update soon.
Medieval Mystic 2008-07-19 ch 22,	abuseWonderful! Better than I could have imagined it. Talk about a kiss that leaves you sweating... I eagerly look forward to more.
faxness-rulz 2008-07-19 ch 22,	abuseYAY FINALLY!! =D Loved it. it was brilliant

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