THANK YOU! NO YAOI, NO INCEST, JUST A NICE BOTHER RELATIONSHIP!

E =D
Well I still think you need an english speaking beta to beta me, but well, that's as far as I go xP

I like it, can't deny it, had fun =D

There some syntax errors, but I get the gist of what you are trying to say. I understand how hard it is to write in a language that is not your own.

Good job.