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Quea
2009-11-27 . chapter 25
W.O.W. I'm at loss of words...speachless...this story was absolutly amazing! It was very well writen. You started with an idea and because you wrote seriously (you know, without too much oral writing, missing commas etc),I was captured by the story.And you guys really worked well together . You were very skillful at making J.K Rowlings characters be HER characters but at the same time making them your own. (I'm sorry if I don't describe what I mean very well - my mother language isn't english, but that's beside the point)

The ending really fit. It's more dramtatic and more realistic than "happily ever after". I would love a sequel, but it should'n be too far from the story's present, and you should be careful not to ruin the masterpice you've made. That's why I'm not sure if Emerald Fog should have a continuation...aww, I don't know what I want >.< No matter what you decide - DONT STOP WRITING! I've checked other stories here on fanfic, but few write as capturing and skilful as you do.You guys are AMAZING! Kepp going!
K1mb3r7y
2009-11-24 . chapter 17
Just one small detail bugged me in all of this: Ron's eyes are blue.



I must also say that I love your charater Belle, you gave her life and a very nice personality, and your early refrence to Uno. Uno is one of my favorite card games and I play it when I get the chance with my aunts and cousins. (I used to play with my dad [died 2007] and i don't like playing with my little sister cuz she whines when she loses and is a huge snob when she wins, and she's only 11) I was happy to know what you where talking about when you meantioned the bridge.
Guardiane77
2009-11-12 . chapter 2
Not to be a know it all, or be rude, but, I noticed a simple "Flaw." At the beginning of the chapter, you named Hermione's Father Roy, but, midway through you named him Dan. Just to let you know. :) But besides that I really like the story. . . .
Marimo141
2009-11-08 . chapter 25
YES THIS STORY NEEDS A SEQUEL. AS SOON AS POSSIBLE. YES!

I loved this story and i would absolutely love to see draco and harry back together!
kat
2009-11-05 . chapter 14
I love you for having read the wild mage series, and referencing it to Harmiones situation!
kat
2009-11-04 . chapter 6
This story is brilliant! Can't wait to read more!
StormyFireDragon
2009-10-22 . chapter 25
this very captivating story definantly needs a sequel. i loved it please i would love to see how the story ends.
arianja
2009-10-15 . chapter 25
Yes, this story needs a sequel.
I would suggest the sequel starts with him leaving St.Mungo's

This is a very fun story to read and i liked it a lot, the only thing that bothered me was that you always said "could care less" (indicating that the person in question cares a lot) instead of "could NOT care less" (indicating that he or she doesn't care much if at all).
Pickles
2009-10-11 . chapter 25
The story was amazing. I can't accurately describe in words how much I enjoyed it. Though I do think a sequel is in order. I'm a hopeless romantic and sad endings always get to me haha. For the sequel, I think it should be in the near future. No wives or anything >.< And post it before it's revised.
EmiY-chan
2009-10-10 . chapter 14
i loved that you put Numair Salmalin in this chapter. I laughed, 'cause i love Tamora Pierce's books and could recognize who you were referring to. I'm not sure how many others could do that. Excellent story by the way, absolutely loving it.
LadyKatt
2009-09-25 . chapter 25
Oh my gosh, this was great. even though you have really long chapters. There just packed with info. I love Belle she was just a laugh even though she wasn't in but a few chapters. Please let there be a sequal i would love to read it.
hidereireadingyourstoryy
2009-09-17 . chapter 14
I'm not done yet but it's great :D<3

and theree is no email spot so, uh, here.

sandrasavage.etf @ geemail . com

hope that works C:
FakeFortune
2009-09-02 . chapter 25
I'm sorry, but I pretty much hate you now i can't belive Harry broke up with Draco its just not right.
firefly820
2009-08-31 . chapter 25
Hi, just let me say, this story was awesome! I believe that this story deserves a sequel. I really don't care how far into the future, but I'm hoping not that far, because Harry needs "love" to defeat Voldie. Don't revise before you write the new one.

I'm really hoping in part 2, that Mione realises what a "Bigot" Ron has become and dumps him for Sev.
rein hitomi
2009-08-14 . chapter 25
Damn, that was just a good read. Thank you guys for posting this story up. I truly loved every bit of it. :)

But I digress. What I REALLY loved about this story is the ending. I know I'm being (kind of) sick for denying that I didn't want a happy, overly sappy type of ending, but I'm sicker for agreeing with how you guys ended it - and shamelessly asking for that happy, overly sappy ending anyway..in the sequel. Which leads me to..

First, yes this needs a sequel. PLEASE DO. For the setting, I think it would be best to pick up from where 'Emerald Fog' has left, but not advancing too much on the events. I guess a transition would be necessary, but after that, the continuation would have to start. That's my suggestion, anyway. After all, we still need to learn what happened to Voldie Dearest.XDD And how he would end up, of course.

As for the second question, for one thing - and I'm sure we would all agree - those who enjoyed this as much as I did would want the sequel before the revision of 'Emerald Fog.' :D But it's still up to you guys as well.

Good luck with the rest, and again, it was great reading this!
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