"When Gokudera woke up, his hair was stuck to the lollipop."
Nice.<3

"You know I hate the cold"

“I do. So I said to myself, ‘Takeshi, it’s your responsibility to help him stay warm,’ and here I am.”

hahaha, Yamamoto. Nice one.

“Mm,” Yamamoto murmured by his ear. “Yummy.”

Gokudera rolled his eyes. “**.” Ahahahahahaha. Don't know why but that CRACKED me up.

And the end was perfect. GREAT story.

Haha! Cute! X3

LOL, the last phrase is the best. Poor goku!

This one was fun to read. It's fluffy and sweet! (I think I just described a cotton candy back there) Anyway, I had fun reading this. I was also listening to Mika's Lollipop when I was reading this so I found it doubly amusing. I hope to read more 8059 fics from you.

haha, i like the ending. lollipop stuck to Hayato's head. xD

lol the ending was great. Love this humorous little fic! great job~

Rofl, omg I loved this story! It was so cute and funny~ *3*

That last line had me laughing hysterically for quite some time, as did that "No, seriously, that thing is a ** beast" line.

I really love your style, it flows very smoothly and makes it seem more realistic. =D

It's one of those fanfics that make you grin like an idiot and laugh at every fifth sentence.
I'm still grinning, :D

Uh-oh...Run Yamamoto Run!! Wow. That was cute, but you had me laughing my ** off at the end with that simple line.

lol i love the ending i could see his face when he found the lollipop...lol...so funny!!