Reviews for Heart Broken Shell

Reviews For: Heart Broken Shell

GoddesOfWrath 2008-07-03 ch 1,	abuseYOU CAN NOT I REPEAT YOU CAN NOT LEAVE IT LIKE THAT!
piratepenguin666 2008-06-11 ch 1,	abuseThis CAN NOT be the end! i mean it practically screams out sequel for pete's sake! I love the angst side to this and i would love to see Kantarou argue with Haruka over this or something like that. Kantarou is usually stubborn and so is Haruka so it would make the perfect scene. Please make a new chapter to this!
DeathGoddess18 2008-04-22 ch 1,	abuseKeep going. At least do one other chapter. This one was really good.
Silver-White-Tiger 2008-04-01 ch 1,	abuseHi!! Nice fic, quite cute! If you a beta there a special section for betas where you could look for one that fits your criteria. I'm also a beta so if you want I could help. Anyway, I liked the story even if it's rather sad. It sounds rather inconclusive, I'd suggest you redo the ending but I suppose it works. You got three options, one try and make a continuation and fail. Two, make an omake or parallel. Three, ust forget about it and make something else. Your choice.
darkchild 2008-03-10 ch 1, anon.	abusePlease update as soon as possible, this story is good^_^...
iShiznitch 2008-02-13 ch 1,	abuseVery pretty. Very Very Pretty. You make my Tactics love stay strong ahaha. Please, more on your version of the curse would be lovely
darkokita 2008-02-05 ch 1,	abuseHello I'm new to the net and to Tactics and I love them both. I was very pleased with your story and would like to leave a proper review so here goes; You needn't have worried about the rating, I think this would qualify as T and if you want to change it you will probably get a few more readers. The premise is wonderful and you have me on the edge of my seat wondering where the scar/curse came from and why Kantaro doesn't talk about it. A sequel (or at least a new chapter) is a must. There were a few errors (spelling, typo, grammar) but nothing serious. The only thing I know about beta's is that they seem to be the modern day version of 'editors' (I'm a bit of an old fogey myself). If there is someone who's writing skills you trust, perhaps you could ask them to read over your story and help correct any errors before you upload. That's really the only thing I can think of but I'm sure there is something about betas in one of the forums on this site so maybe they can help. Please keep at it, Thanks
DesperateLoveKoi 2008-01-21 ch 1,	abuseI like this fanfic and I hope that there'll be another chapter? or Squeal to it? Please, and to answer your question about finding a Beta, I'm sorry to answer with a 'I don't know' I'm sorry. But please do keep up the great work! ^^ Arigato for writing and uploading this fic! ^^
MiniskirtDeiDei911 2008-01-21 ch 1,	abuseo! please do a sequel!! i like the ending...but its just SCREAMING for a sequel! =] its really good, i like it ^^
CrimsonMoon14 2008-01-17 ch 1,	abuseAw! This is such a great fanfic! I don't really think they were out of character that much. But it was perfect nonetheless because it worked out wonderfully! PLEASE make a sequel!
bludreamfindsaiya 2008-01-17 ch 1, anon.	abusei guess i'm one of the old folks then...oh well this story is good!can you make a sequel?
Minako Angel (not signed in... 2008-01-17 ch 1, anon.	abuse~ Wow! Great idea! Poor Kan-Chan! Would you write a sequel? I'd love to read one. You've written so many Tactics fics, and I was glad to see another one today! About beta's, usually you can just ask for one when you post a new chappy. That's how I became a beta for someone (after they were looking), so I think that's how you find one. If you're really stuck, I wouldn't mind doing it, but it's ok if you'd rather have someone else. Actually, being a beta helps motivate me to think about my own work at the same time I appreciate someone else's masterpiece. You don't make too many mistakes anyway, just a few grammatical errors and typos. Oh, another thing, I like the bleeding scar plotline. I have an idea planned for my story involving Kan-Chan's scar ~teehee~ but, let me get back to your ficcy...there's a lot you could do with this plot, and I'd like to know more about this curse... And finally, yes, I do think you should continue this! Keep writing and supporting the Tactics fandom! W00t! Best wishes, - Minako Angel x ~ Sorry to write so much rubbish in a review...but at least now you won't be sad!

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