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| athenaprime 2008-05-18 ch 23,  | abuseJust when I think things are easing, you throw another twist into the plot. Fascinating, and I can't wait to find out how it all ends! :) |
| J. Bittersweet 2008-05-09 ch 22, | abuseDamn. That's enough to make you lose your mind completely. But Nihlus will save her!! |
| athenaprime 2008-05-05 ch 21, | abuseAwesome. I want to write "Scales and Scarlet Lips" now. |
| Thylja 2008-04-27 ch 9, | abuseI've only come as far as chapter 8 of your story but I'm already struck with awe. Barely have I ever read a story that's so delicately and well put together, mixing poetic writing with an interesting story and brilliantly dynamic characters. Where many writers who pay as much detail to character-development and relationships get lost in that and tend to lose track of their ongoing storyline, you bring it together so beautifully it's amazing to read. Best wishes, Thylja. |
| J. Bittersweet 2008-04-17 ch 20, | abusethe Singing One must be a Rachni Queen. I'm amazed by how you can immerse yourself in these characters so as to write these very personal letters. I don't think I could ever do that. Very nice! Next chapter please! |
| J. Bittersweet 2008-04-12 ch 19, | abuselol "you're not my first turian". Go on Ida, tell Nihlus you love him. heehee |
| athenaprime 2008-04-12 ch 19, | abuseThis has to be one of the saddest chapters yet. Very perceptive ending and very powerful imagery. Very nicely done. |
| J. Bittersweet 2008-04-05 ch 18, | abuseHaha I spent like 10 minutes after I finished reading trying to figure out why you titled the chapter "Nudity". I feel Ida's pain. Everybody wishes they could kiss Nihlus "like that". lol Great Chapter. I sense the story is coming to an end, and I just hope it has a bittersweet ending at least...no pun intended. :D |
| Padme4000 2008-04-01 ch 17, | abusei loved it |
| athenaprime 2008-03-30 ch 17, | abuseThe letters, and the relationship between Ida and Nihlus, both in their own way are revealing in intimacy. The letters show such a compelling and poetic glimpse into each sister. |
| Mike 2008-03-30 ch 17, anon. | abuseLOVE it I always look forward to reading the next chapter. Hurry with your finals(doing well in them of coarse) and return soon I so cant wait for the next installment of your wonderful story. |
| keegxobx 2008-03-29 ch 17, anon. | abusethat was great! I was so proud of myself when I realized that Misea was on the Rayya. (nice reference) it was really interesting and UPDATE SOON |
| magooglersriot 2008-03-28 ch 16, | abuseWow, this is an amzing story. I cant beleve I just found it now. Anyway, really great job. keep up the awesome work! |
| Dreamweaver74 2008-03-25 ch 16, | abuseMy gosh, I am so in love with this story, it just keeps getting better and better! To be perfectly honest, there really isn't anything I can write that hasn't already been written by every one else or myself. But I'll keep reading and (and reviewing!), and enjoying this bit of literary heaven. |
| J. Bittersweet 2008-03-24 ch 16, | abuseI hear what you're saying, I think. But how do we know turians don't have shiny metallic "pistols"? God... The chapter was fantastic. A very nice thing to come home to. I hope you put up the next chapter right away. |