this is another amazing story i read this day...:)(looks at the clock and yawns)...but i'm still wondering why didn't kanda have said something after allen kisses him at the last part of the story?(no reaction or something)...but eventhough my minds wondering this is a nice story...hope that u'll make more...

Tears formed a little when Allen had his outburst. But the ending was cute. >w

wow, i can so imagine allen doing that (though in my mind, Kanda caught allen before he fell to the floor...or found him unconcious and took him to his room and tried to molest him there...wow...im a perv!) lol, thx for the Kanda translation, not quite there yet but yea, keep it up nya~!
~Lonely Kitty

Neatly written. I especially liked the sentence about saviors.

This is a nice story. I'm working on a crossover. Check it out when you have time.

I liked that Kanda didn't get ooc saying "I love you too".. I mean, I can't imagine him being like that.. Sorry, sounds weird. n_n''

I liked this fict.

haha
cute
very nice
yay i can speak "Kanda"!

-HEP-

i want to learn how to speak kanda. XP

This oneshot was awesome, too many times you see how characters get the sudden epiphany and they are falling into each others arms sobbing dramatically...etc [though I must admit I'm a sucker for those too]...This fic does not do that but realistically portrays Kanda very accurately...I hope you write more in the future...Loved it!

This was really neat, but if there's one piece of advice I can give you, it's show not tell. You first paragraoh read sort of like a list.
But still, I really liked this.

aww!! yay! i speak kanda!! ^_^
i loved it! i wish there were more!

wow kanda is so sexy when he was trapped Allen & said "Knock it of Moyashi" XD well he's sexy when being pushy too :P
and i'd love it if you make another KanAre but plz not a threesome with lavi ^_^;
yay for Yullen!! ^_^

Sigh... this is more of shonen-ai than yaoi... it was so indirect... the feelings of Kanda I mean... write a sequel... please... And how did Allen suddenly run into everyone whilst getting away from Yuu? That's way too conincidental... sequel anyway!

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Oh Cool :)

First DGM fanfiction I've read. Lucky you! :3

Bai ♥

By the way, the narration of your story sounds weird. Sorry :#