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| Ravenclaw Samurai 2008-06-08 ch 1,  | abuseAw, they're so cute! |
| FormerlyPrincess-VintageQue... 2008-04-12 ch 1, | abuseoh my that was good. i coudlnt stop giggling at thee nding. *cyberhug* yay you! |
| icebreather 2008-03-03 ch 1, | abuseI just loved the image this conjured, the two of them in the wet grass getting soaked together. And I enjoy how you have them get close emotionally without jumping right over into sexual territory (which seems to happen so often in fanfic). |
| nomad62 2008-02-18 ch 1, | abuseGreat little story. I would love to see more of these two the way you describe them. |
| Kristafied 2008-02-15 ch 1, | abuseThis is just too sweet. Love the gentleness between them and how you write Jayne's character. |
| Shadowsndust 2008-01-20 ch 1, | abuseOh.My.Gosh. Yay! You speaky the tongue of Firefly! That was the cutest story I've read in a long time. Thank you. |
| Sasusc 2008-01-19 ch 1, | abuseThis is so cute! I love this. |
| teenelizabeth 2008-01-18 ch 1, | abuseThis is a fantastic piece of writing all around. Lovely! -Christine |
| GirlWithNoName-Elli3 2008-01-18 ch 1, | abuseThat was heaps cool! Will there be a follow-up? |
| Elliesmeow 2008-01-17 ch 1, | abuseThat made me laugh. I didn't like the others laughing at Jayne's fear. At least one person should have abstained from it. I know he wouldn't have but don't they think themselves better people than he is? Glad River and Jayne had each other. That was nice. -Ellie |
| Serenity Hope 2008-01-17 ch 1, anon. | abuseAw this was so sweet! Unexpected and unique. I really liked it. |
| JessMess 2008-01-17 ch 1, | abusegreat little story that you have here. I love how they were both vulnerable whilst staying in character as much as possible. Good job. BYe |
| Fififelicity 2008-01-17 ch 1, | abuseThis is really good. jayne wasnt particularly out of character and I do like Rayne oneshots to be friendship based. It seems wrong to jump in at the romantic end, just because it starts of soo unlikely. I really enjoyed this, thankyou for writing it. |
| The Light in The Shadows. 2008-01-17 ch 1, | abusei like it well done, ive yet to see firefly but ive seen serenity so i got lots of it |
| FabledFigment 2008-01-17 ch 1, | abuseHow sweet and lovely. A common experiance to draw them together. Excellent. |