 uzukun7 2008-01-18 . chapter 2that was a nice explanation of the chapter before this one. its kinda funny that he just ninja'ed his way through the day just to try to see what she does on a day to day basis. i also find it a bit surprising that he didnt get into a physical fight with sasuke, he really had it coming. well i hope you continue writing fics like this one. laterz |
 Ower 2008-01-18 . chapter 2Dam I know exactly what pic you are talking about, and I cnow exactly why you had the urge to write something about it (too bat, I am not much of a writer)
I loved this story. It was written really good, in me opinion and was greatly sad, especialy the end. |
 andriod84 2008-01-17 . chapter 1 not much naru/saku and if thats gonna be ur onshot well, then its pretty sadd, u hav no choice BUT to continiue |
 uzukun7 2008-01-17 . chapter 1i really liked the story. i mean everything up until the last 6 paragraphs went very smoothly. then for no reason, naruto shows up out of nowhere and hugs her from behind. i think if your going to continue this you might want to explain what went on there. this story cant be all sakura and sasuke the whole time and then naruto shows up and hugs sakura. its just weird. in either case i hope you do update soon. laterz |