Whoa! This was great! I love how you write! I can't wait for chappie 6! ^_^

Aw. This was so sad. Poor Roxie. lol

I like Sleeping Beauty! D: This was so cute. It made me tingle XD

Whoa! I LOVE the prologue! It made me eager to read the story. I'm sorry that I didn't review earlier, I just have a lot on my plate. Anyways, onward! :DD

nice. now continue. plz

hmm, I'm noticing u have thing for memories. lol. well Welcome to the club! lol. nice. like the poetic angle its nice.

OMG this story is soo great!
I love love love it!
This chapter was written like really well.
Hahahaha!
Selpihe makes me laugh so much!
“Well I think you’re gay; please accept this and find a boyfriend. Making up excuses about girls actually being vampires doesn’t solve anything. Goodnight.”
CLASSIC!
XD
And poor Sora...thinking he's going crazy when we all know that Kairi actually WAS there hehe...
I'm really looking forward to seeing where this goes! ^-^
Toodles!

okay so i know i like read this a million years ago but i was just re-reading it and i want more. now. go on! It's really rather excellent and i love namine! she's so cool!

i like that Roxas has his own chapter and his own point of view. it's really cool. and i like that selphie comes into her own and really gets her own personality across in this one. i also find it halarious that you referenced that conversation we had with Sebastian. fun!he is SO god-damn STRAIGHT! xoxoxoxoxox

*gasp* All of the threads...they're...coming TOGETHER! We! I love it when that happens. :P

haha, can i please have full permission to quote you on like every line in this story.

i mean talk about comic relief, that is what i need in my story.
honestly, asexual. that had me laughing all over the floor...

woah. Roxas is surprisingly deep. i like it. -insert large, extremely large smirk here- haha. what it is Roxas, am i not allowed to gawk, or have they made that illegal too. dang. flubbernuggets. =P

i like how you started from the beginning again. it was good.

and i can honestly say, when i read memories that was not the conversation i pictured Roxas having, but i mean I LOVED IT! and not just saying it about the funnies, although they were great. honestly this story is amazing. :)

like i dunno i cant explain it but the way you write, i dunno, it is just great. you should be an actress that writers her own lines. haha.

and so yeah. dang Roxas, you are A MAN...total guy alert here...sheepish blush...wish he would kiss me. =P

so yeah...Roxas seems pretty ZOMG (in a bad way) about Olette, i would not be surprised if he cute himself...like there was this one time in the story...um let me find it real quick...
yeah here it is: quilt caused me PHYSICAL pain...i dunno, it just seems like a hint hint, to us you know.

anyway. what was i saying, oh yeah. Roxas i think he could go down the wrong path real soon...i mean not as bad as Sora...well a different path.
like Sora wants to kill himself
Roxas wants to kill others...i know it sounds weird. but nevermind...

anyway, so yeah. now i feel stupid. i thought you wrote it, but i mean now i can say good um use of resources! =P haha you got to admit that was a nice save. =P

so yeah. update soon cause this story is FRICKEN AMAZEN YO! FHO SHIZZLE! ...my nizzle. haha.
yeah...
BYE! :)

Hey, its me again, sorry for not noticing this new story, but I got a new computer recently and I have had some trouble logging onto

Anyway, I like what I see here so far, there is a lot of intrigue running through my mine to what this story is going to turn out to be. Keep up what you're doing, its great work.

Update soon. =] Until next time.

Wow... All of the chapters so far a beautifully writen. How long does it take for this brilliance to get on to the page? Just...wow. ;)

Jynx

Ok i think he was writing to Olette...judging from memories.

woah this was written beautifully. i am amazed, really. i think you should become a professional poet.

anyway. i get the poem at the beginning. it just clicked while i was reading this.

He lost his love, Olette...but maybe he could love again...sorry if that did not make sense i have risk on the mind...um...its a board game.

anyway! this really was written well. i am so proud of you!

so yeah. please update soon! i cant wait to read the story from my favorite couples POV! tehe.

bye! :)

woah this is really deep. you did a great job. i really like it.

man, Namine sure does think a lot more than she says...if she does have the same personality as Memories...

oh oh that reminds me, i like the title. you did a nice job, good choice.
tehe.

i wonder what made you think of it tho?

anyway... when i read the part about sleeping beauty, i could not help of think of my story weird, right. i think it is so cool.

anyway. nice job! NEXT CHAPTER TIME! :)