Hmm...a different idea. It's sad when you think that some stuff like that really does happen. Keep up your good work.

It's Malon isn't it?

Anyway really good stuff, yeah?

Keep it up!!

thats a fun story... i was expecting link to show up but hey, shiek needs some of the lime light too... least thats what my gf always tells me

Ok, this was... really, really CREEPY. You did a good job in setting the tone, perhaps a little too well. I was able to tell the guy was gonna be a creep from the first sentece her was mentioned, and that shouldn't have been obvious for a paragraph or two. Still I'm glad you didn't make anything TRULY tragic happen to your main character, and all she lost was her car. I still hope you'll write something where the creep has something really EVIL happen to him, he deserves it!