Provocative. Nice. Knowing Lain, she probably wouldn't have done that, but I suppose it's what we all wish she would have done.

Such an awesome story! It makes the whole story/series end...happier ^-^
Keep Writing...or else!!

Woo, okay. Hello, it's Wolf here. Like said before, I love your story very much, and you should be proud of it. Alice is so in character, and so is Lain. It's magnificent. Also, I didn't have a chance at school to fav it ^^

Keep writing!

Can't log on yet, but I'm at school. Just wanted to say, awesome story. I love it very much! I will review again when I'm home, later. See ya round, I hope.