I found it incredible how many times this was written in the wrong tense, still its a good story when you place everything in the right tense, but you need to do it while you read or it starts sounding odd.

Its been a year, I love this story so please come back and write more I truely enjoy reading it

Until next time
Gloria

I hope you come back and finish this story soon.

Way to go! Ron and Molly are going to use Amortentia (love potion) on Harry and Hermione. They don't care about these two. Not really. I hope Percy and George warn them.

Excellent!

I just wish it had happened. I wish people hadn't fallen for Dumbles grandfather act or Hermione had used her brains to see what was in front of her eyes and done something about it.

Superb! I am ashamed of Mr and Mrs Weasley neither of them are using their brains! What a selfish pair they are. I expected it from Molly but not from Arthur.

Harry is getting there. Really Ron needs to ask himself what his goals are and what Hermione's are. What they want for the future and how they want to live. The fact that Ron can't stand to stay in an airplane for 21 hours without magic and doesn't know how much her parents mean to her pretty much says everything you need too about their relationship. He takes, she gives.

Good one! Harry never got their presents!

Excellent! About time these people see what is real.

Good chapter.

Excellent insight, Harry!

Terrific!!

Well, It was a good fic... I guess you'd lost the will you continue this, since a year is more than a quick hiatus. It'd be better if it'd get finished of course but still very decent as it is.

great story... please update soon