I found this story really strange but i liked it because of that! ^__^

This is absolutely beautifully written and near painfully exquisite. Your descriptions were utterly mind-blowing. I am in awe of your skill of painting such vivid pictures with mere words. And the fact that this pairing is my favorite pairing helps too. :3 Though I've only seen SephirothVincent. This is a refreshing difference. Wonderous job! Hope to see more!

-GunnyLeonhart

This story was savory. :) You did an excellent job with the characters and the descriptions, as usual. It also doesn't hurt that Vincent and Sephiroth happen to be two of my favorite characters from any video game. I was delighted to read this and look forward to your future fanfictions. Keep up the wonderful work.

Oh, that was so cute!! x)
I got a little worried when he just went away,
i really started to think sephy was an real idiot..
but thanks he came back!! xD

Love it, thanks! See ya around! // Demon

Hate to say it...but...

AW!
What a cute ending!! Seph being a fairy princess about knocked me out of the chair, too, by the way.
His insecurities in Vincent having the ability to love him was sad, but wamring at the same time. So sweet! :)
This was a lovely story.
Your descriptions were...unreal.
In a good way, of course.
I wish I had that sort of attention to detail

Um...WOW!

I loved the start of this story, with the dream-like sequence involving the fairy-girl. I will admit, it did confuse me. But it added an extra element to the story, which is rarely seen in slash fiction.

I've read a lot of SephVincent, but I've never read any VincentSeph! The reversal of the normal roles was really entertaining and a lot more believeable I think.

I don't have much else to say...excellent writing and I really enjoyed reading it!

Best of luck.

I've been reading it from the start and love the originality. I'm glad someone else around here appreciates original stories as much as I do. Very strong story, great plot, and very nice ending. The reason I like it so much is because I write strictly original titles with minimal following of the story-line.

OMG, i need the next chapter now! xP
You ended just where i wanted to read more! *growl*
Heh, cant wait!!

Sephy really starts to get it now, good!
And poor Vincent cant stand being without sephy! x)

Keep this good writing up, Hakucho-chan!

*grins like a mad woman* Oh, it's about to get GOOD. I am so excited!! I love Sephiroth's expression of relief that Vincent is NOT his daddy, though with how screwed up those two are, I doubt that "small factor" would have stopped them from sleeping with each other.
Vincet is just one swirling mass of confusion, isn't he? Poor guy, he needs to just give in, and realise that maybe listening to Chaos once in a while isn't such a bad thing!! just do it, Vin! Sleep with him!

haha, anyway, this is, to me, the best chapter so far. It cleared a lot of the air for us, as the reader, finally letting us know for sure just how the two of them feel about each other. Up til know, I had been a little worried that Vin was going to talk himself out of it. Well, not any more! :)

Can't wait for next chappy!

glad to see chapter four back up! Poor Seph, why is Vincent making him go back to the tower?! Doesn't he have a nice bed they can share or something?! :) hahaha
The wing release thing was really cool, and dear Seph is just going a tad insane (again). I so though Vin was actually touching him, then it winds up being some wing-induced hallucinatin?! Gah! TEASE! hahaa

so very, very nice!

ah, I am totally loving this one.
I just ADORE the Seph/Vin pairing, and the Chaos-Seph-Vin triangle thing is just as yummy. Even though it seems so "wrong" it really is nice sometimes to see Seph so...helpless, to the point of begging, even. And believe me, you have captured that element quite nicely here. I like Vincent's inner turmoil, as not really understanding what to think about the whole thing, just knowing that he thinks Seph's perty, hahaha.

I'm guessing the story is undergoing some construction, as far as making the genre move goes, if that person's review is any sort of proof. I was really curious as to why I hadn't found this story before, I guess it being under a dif category would explain that :)

Can't wait for more! Seph and Vin have to get all lovey SOON!

I think you should know that this fic is in the wrong section. Please remove and resubmit it in the Games category under Final Fantasy VII. More people might actually read and review it this way.
Final Fantasy Unlimited is a completely different thing.

SomeReallyRandomPerson.

Oh my!! This was so good!! xD
Thanks! I´ve been longing for some Sephy softness and Yaoi-crazyness!!
Just what i need in my life, hehe, but dont dare quite on it, keep it coming! =D
Wonderful words you use, the image of it all gets so beautiful.
Hope it happens more next chapter too, keep on feeding me! Hehe!

That sephy just got to release the hate and all "unhumanity"!
Next time it can be Vincent who realeses his wings, eh?
Or maybe both of them, hehe?

Well, well, you know what your doing! Much love between those two, please! xP

Thanks!
// Demon

Great story! xD Loves it, i just cant resist the pairing of Vincent and sephiroth, but i hope there will be more "loveness" between them. please?

and whats about this girl? cant he do it with Vinny instead?? xP
Haha..Well, i may be crazy, but still.. would you mind?

You have a beautiful way of experssing feelings with words!
Thanks and keep it coming!! /Demon