This is a one-shot? If so, great work as always. If not- great wok as always, and I'm expecting an update. Also, I'm gonna send you a fiend request in LJ too (gloriabear) I was checking the OroSasu community and found you there <3

*pur* that was exquisite, ahaha so beautiful and in character...more? 0:D

Beautiful...chilling, so hard to find any decent in character orosasu and this was perfect

Sequel? 0:3

I hate you Ada Kensington I hate yu and your ability to make brilliant stories! :)

Jokes ur briliant (y)

absolutely marvelous! this is a true work of art, absolutely brilliant! wonderful descriptions! AWESOME!

I have to say this is very nicely done. Orochimaru really is a totally cold and emotionless guy and you portray him VERY well. Scary it seems.


Over all...Brava!

You really were serious when you said that you like to write drama on the side, weren't you?

Hugs & Kisses & Cookies
Luna Lunak

That was very good.
Very very good. ;_;

Wow, that was simply amazing. It was very well written and intense. Very chilling, especially the end. I liked it, well done! ^_^

Wow...that was amazing. The ending was very chilling. I love how you describe Orochimaru's eyes as the color of bitter wine. I'm adding this to my favorite stories. ^^

Man, that's intense. I love the style - it's real sophisticated and almost poetic.

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sends shivers down my spine with that last line

Wow. Just, wow. That is amazing. I really love it. Probably the best Oro/Sasu fanfiction I have ever read (ADITL comes second, but hey, they're both by you) ever! I really love it. It's so well written. Amazing. ^.^ Why are you so amazing? PEACE OUT!

NaruGuru

Last line took me totally off guard. Perfect ending.

Well, can you imagine my surprise that while flipping through Orochimaru fanfictions (and passing by a Orochi/Kisame) I saw this, and the moment I saw the author, I think I went, "no. Freaking. Way."

This was amazing. Loved the language, the plot, the creepiness . . . definitely made a mood there.

Basically, I loved it!

It's good but I prefer your drama stories to the enviromental creative writing,