maybe you should do more of these only they're "chaptered"...and probably title it 'The annoying and funny escapades of mello and matt' XD I dunno

I love this. So, so much. Never stop!! Live on!! xD

“Speak of the devil! Some chicks are coming…! LOOK HOT.”

And that's where I burst out laughing, and didn't stop til the end on the fic. :D This was fantastic, seriously. I laughed so hard.

xD OMG! That was so funny! xDD I can't stop laughing, like, seriously. Wonderful job Envy-chan! *huggles* xD ILU~!

haha what the crap, man...very strange indeed
this was very clever

nice work

Oh. Mello is a smooth talker. I'd sleep with him. XD

Poor Matt can't get any. He needs to take some tips from Near, too, apparently.

WOW. That was so funny. XD Really. I loved how they talked. Hoes? Bwahahahaha. Matt was totally cute in this, I loved how he was so enthusiastic about the whole thing. Right, let's HOP TO IT.

=') I'm so going to start saying that from now on.

Loved the mention of Near.

Girlie, come on, you have to do more for DN! Please? *-*

Goodbye and goodluck!

Well, I do hink I'm in love with this |D

I adore the second to last line. I really tops everything off, hell yes~

Poor Matt, he isn't gonna get any, is he XD;

The sad thing is how damn hard that made me laugh XD It was... well... oh gawd it was wonderful XD
I think if Mello walked up to me and asked that, i'd respond the same damn way.
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... XD
Anyhow.. Enough about that.
Good work.

Oh man, do you make me laugh my ** off! XD

My fav line is, of course, the second to last one ;D

And the title is especially classy!

It was great to read some crack!Death Note from you! It was awesome *o*
Even though you said it's unlikely, I'm still gonna hope you'll write a teensy-weensy little more Death Note crack (just a little more, pretty please? ;_; XD)~