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| somthing completely differe... 2008-02-17 ch 1,  | abuseThis is a really good story- please update soon! |
| unique.normality 2008-02-12 ch 1, | abuseplease, please update soon!! awesome writing! |
| nels5189 2008-02-03 ch 1, | abuseGreat story. Updating soon? |
| Cassandra's Cross 2008-01-24 ch 1, | abuseThis was great! Are you planning to continue? Hope so. I'll put it on story alert in the event. |
| Kwannom 2008-01-23 ch 1, | abuseVery promising first chapter. Very well written indeed. Besides, the humor was in the right dose, the characters were in character, their interaction was lovely and the storyline kept me interested from the first to the last line of the chapter. I'm glad I finally found a fic about Ron and Hermione that is worth reading. Can I ask you something, though? I would love to see more of Ron's point of view. His POV and Hermione's POV were very balanced in the beginning of the chapter, but hers somehow took over the story from the middle to the end. And it is so interesting to see how Ron's mind work =D Brazilian hugs to you and I'm already waiting for the next installment of your fic. Good job! Lore aka kwannom |
| KD Skywalker 2008-01-22 ch 1, | abuseInteresting story...please continue! |
| FreeTheHouseElves 2008-01-21 ch 1, | abuseUpdate soon! I really like it! |
| angel 2008-01-20 ch 1, anon. | abuseI know you just posted this recently, but I actually keep checking back on this story to see if you've already posted updates. I have read a lot on this archive, and your characters really do sound true to the originals. It's just lovely. |
| wasu 2008-01-19 ch 1, | abusehi I love it so please update very soon and keep it up bye wasu |
| lucy2525 2008-01-19 ch 1, | abuseahh! gone dead or gone out ..somewhere?! |
| amieam 2008-01-18 ch 1, | abuseExcellent beginning. I can't wait for more. |
| angel 2008-01-18 ch 1, anon. | abuseAwesome! The character voices are so right. Please continue! |
| Duck Goddess 2008-01-17 ch 1, | abuseOh, wow, this is great! I've always loved post-DH fics and your characterisations are spot-on. I'm glad that Ron and Hermione are still a bit uncomfortable with each other but can finally act on the sexual tension between them. Their journey on the plane was hilarious and I can't believe you left us with a cliffhanger ending! Update soon please! |
| WhiskeyTangoFoxtrot 2008-01-17 ch 1, | abuseOkay, this? Great start! I love Ron and Hermione in this--you've got Ron's attitude, temper, charm, etc. all down. Loved him with the plane. And I loved your Hermione. This seems to really fit the dynamic Jo created for them; banter, bickering, and each one encouraging the other. I really, really like this. I'm assuming this is a multi-chapter story, right? |