 Clara 2009-10-28 . chapter 1 your story is soo good, please continue it! i love ron and hermy, they make such a cute couple |
 Completely Different 2008-02-17 . chapter 1This is a really good story- please update soon! |
 unique.normality 2008-02-12 . chapter 1please, please update soon!!
awesome writing! |
 nels5189 2008-02-03 . chapter 1Great story. Updating soon? |
 Cassandra's Cross 2008-01-24 . chapter 1This was great! Are you planning to continue? Hope so. I'll put it on story alert in the event. |
 Kwannom 2008-01-23 . chapter 1Very promising first chapter. Very well written indeed. Besides, the humor was in the right dose, the characters were in character, their interaction was lovely and the storyline kept me interested from the first to the last line of the chapter. I'm glad I finally found a fic about Ron and Hermione that is worth reading.
Can I ask you something, though? I would love to see more of Ron's point of view. His POV and Hermione's POV were very balanced in the beginning of the chapter, but hers somehow took over the story from the middle to the end. And it is so interesting to see how Ron's mind work =D Brazilian hugs to you and I'm already waiting for the next installment of your fic. Good job!
Lore aka kwannom |
 KD Skywalker 2008-01-22 . chapter 1Interesting story...please continue! |
 FreeTheHouseElves 2008-01-21 . chapter 1Update soon! I really like it! |
 angel 2008-01-20 . chapter 1 I know you just posted this recently, but I actually keep checking back on this story to see if you've already posted updates. I have read a lot on this archive, and your characters really do sound true to the originals. It's just lovely. |
 wasu 2008-01-19 . chapter 1hi
I love it
so please update very soon and keep it up
bye
wasu |
 lucy2525 2008-01-19 . chapter 1ahh!
gone dead or gone out ..somewhere?! |
 amieam 2008-01-18 . chapter 1Excellent beginning. I can't wait for more. |
 angel 2008-01-18 . chapter 1 Awesome! The character voices are so right. Please continue! |
 Duck Goddess 2008-01-17 . chapter 1Oh, wow, this is great! I've always loved post-DH fics and your characterisations are spot-on. I'm glad that Ron and Hermione are still a bit uncomfortable with each other but can finally act on the sexual tension between them. Their journey on the plane was hilarious and I can't believe you left us with a cliffhanger ending! Update soon please! |
 WhiskeyTangoFoxtrot 2008-01-17 . chapter 1Okay, this? Great start! I love Ron and Hermione in this--you've got Ron's attitude, temper, charm, etc. all down. Loved him with the plane. And I loved your Hermione. This seems to really fit the dynamic Jo created for them; banter, bickering, and each one encouraging the other. I really, really like this. I'm assuming this is a multi-chapter story, right? |