Reviews for A Night to Remember

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EddieVF 2008-03-26 ch 1,	abuseA great story, I really enjoyed it,I like sports and Ron and Kim relationship, so this fic was perfect for me :) Great story, you're an awesome writer. Eddie VF
kp83 2008-02-18 ch 1,	abuseNice!!
Thomas Linquist 2008-02-16 ch 1,	abuseLoved the story, Cap. You Americans are obsessed with high school football, aren't you? Well, we have hockey covered in the same way. Returning your salute, sword to the forehead, Thomas
Ace Ian Combat 2008-01-28 ch 1,	abuseRofl! Shego, the over rambunctious, unofficial Middleton cheerleader. I did think it was a little harsh for Barkin to call the villians as a group freaks, but I'm guessing it's before Stop Team Go and he hasn't seen that side of Shego yet. I figured out what section of the crowd was them at the first mention of green fireworks, nice touch. Slightly disappointed that Ron used MMP; not just for knocking that player around, but earlier for the first touchdown, blue glowing eyes or not. Unless he didn't know he was using it... Great job, and I enjoyed it, lack of football enthusiasm on my part included, you actually made me eager to see how it turned out.
kpfan72491 2008-01-22 ch 1,	abuseGreat story
Ranchero D 2008-01-22 ch 1,	abuseThis is the best football game I've ever been to! Thanks, Cap! RD
Aero Tendo 2008-01-20 ch 1,	abuseGreat story! Even though I'm not one to pay attention to sports much, I loved how you made me feel that I was more involved in game than if I was actually watching it in person. :) I think you did a great job of the villains. They were very funny, energetic and if they were on really into football games that much I can imagine the scene just like that. Especially with the foam stuff! Lol! Having the reporter come back from the show to interview the villains was a nice touch. She doesn't get a chance to shine much in any fanfic that I know of. The football stealing (yeah, I know Shego wouldn't have a problem getting it. Though I bet she just walked up and said "Can I have the ball?" and with her hot looks got it handed to her quite eagerly. Lol!) was a great touch and having it signed by all of the villains was even better! Kim... ouch! I sure hope she gets plenty of TLC from Ron after the game. She is one lucky girl that it wasn't more serious than that. I imagine she knows just how lucky she is to have a loving guy like Ron in her life. Ron... Ron... Ron... what can I say? He's gotta watch that temper even if the jerk rightfully deserved it. At least Kim set him straight and he didn't use his powers for that final touchdown. Still, I liked when the players commented on how hard it was for them to bring Ron down, and easy it was for Kim to do it. Very funny! Kim's love has and always will knock Ron over. :) Keep up the most excellent work!
BabyBeaver 2008-01-19 ch 1,	abuseNice! I like how teh enemies showed up and were nice for once, and how you incorporated old 'inside jokes' into the story. I'm not much a football fan, but it was fun to read about how well Ron does and stuff. Very nice. I like it a lot. =D
Quathis 2008-01-19 ch 1,	abuseThat was great! Funny, with romance and action to spice it up. The villians definately added to the story, especially how protective and fond of Ron Shego was. Wonderful throughout.
Danny-171984 2008-01-18 ch 1,	abuseCaptain, it's been a while. Well, to start off, this story rocks. We all knew that Ron could make it big as a football player. This story clearly showed how good he can really be. And that promise Ron did to Kim, which he kept, was awesome. I don't know if I should say "how lucky HE is" or "how lucky SHE is"...It goes both ways I guess. Until next time. Keep on writing. Danny
Slyrr 2008-01-18 ch 1,	abuseExcellent stuff! Yours had a more romantic slant, but check out ch. 1 of 'Friend in Darkness' and you'll see that great minds do indeed think alike... : ) PLus you probably know a lot more about football than I do.
LTAOZFAN 2008-01-18 ch 1,	abuseNicely done, Captain, as always! I like the idea of some of the villains taking an honest interest in sports, and the reference to Kim as a 'blue fox' by Junior was good. But I was puzzled by one line, late in the story, when Ron takes the ball and goes for a touchdown. There seems to be a word missing, for the line reads " . . . handed off to Ron, who and hurtled . . . " It looks to me that there should be a word between 'who' and 'hurtled,' yes / no? (Yes, I'm also a "TaleSpin" fan.) LTAOZFAN "Them's my views, amen, so be it." "Treasure Island," by R. L. Stevenson
MrDrP 2008-01-18 ch 1,	abuseWhile I thought the villains cheering section was quite OOC, I'm willing to let that pass, both because I could see Shego as a football fan and because so many depressing stories have been appearing on this site lately that a grande sized dose of K/R sweetness was very welcome. BTW, I thought you did a great job describing the play action.
Drakonis Aurous 2008-01-18 ch 1,	abuseThis is Great! Nice redux on Homecoming Upset. I like Ron's "inspiration" for making touchdowns. And five touchdowns? Then there's that determination after the incident close to halftime. Whoa! Drakken, Monkeyfist, Duff Killigan and the Seniors came to watch the game and not to fight? I dod like how each one of them took credit in "training" Ron to run! And Shego's a football fan? And the ending, Great! Nice work! - Drakonis Aurous
Yankee Bard 2008-01-18 ch 1,	abuseCute story. The villian cheer section was a nice touch.

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