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Kirsty-Cullen
2009-12-15 . chapter 6
haha i loved it pleasse continue its so funny XD
Captainimpalerrox
2009-12-09 . chapter 4
Juno is the best!

"Dude, your baby looks like a squirrel!"

"Hey! At least my stomach has something useful in it, whereas yours is filled with Taco Bell!"
Blood and Roses230
2009-12-03 . chapter 6
hurry up with chapter 7 please
Pudding-Chan
2008-10-22 . chapter 6
I love it, lol, Please update soon!
Dellicantica
2008-08-20 . chapter 6
i like it
killer kim
2008-06-17 . chapter 6
i like it alot and really liked it when u called edward prego boy lol
La tua Cantante101
2008-05-21 . chapter 4
U-P-D-A-T-E! I'm actually reviewing 4 chp. 6, cuz the other person on the account already did 4&5, but seriously, chp. 6 was a little plotless, but i do like the story. I want to see more drama, though, but this story is really good otherwise.
Eldrvarya Hljodhrc
2008-05-09 . chapter 6
Ehh... If Rosalie is the one with the miscarriage, then why can't Bella be the one with the affair? Tell Mike it's his, but it's actually Edward's? Even though Edward is her boyfriend already... Ignore that fact!

Funny story, I love it.
InnocentXxXLies
2008-05-04 . chapter 6
DARN YOU AND YOUR SHORT CHAPTERNESS!
This was a good chapter from a great writer...
UPDATE SOON!
~Ivey~
SkullGirlXOXO
2008-05-03 . chapter 6
rofl
through the entire story loved it
keep up the good work
Eternal Night 2008
2008-05-03 . chapter 2
Tisk Tisk to Mike he has no chance and he still cannot give her up and my favorite line was

He turned away and mumbled something. Now, I don’t have Edward’s super hearing, but I swear he said, “Not yet.”

Like I said...

I think (if you haven't ended the baby project yet anyway) that you should have the assignment that they have to go to the others house or/and that they have to do something nice for their partner. MIke would love(!) those since Bella would have to go to his house and he prob would take her on a date for his doing something nice for Bella.Anyways great work and update soon please
Eternal Night 2008
2008-05-03 . chapter 1
Holy Crap funny! I loved it but you should have made Jasper and Aloce have differeny partners hehe that would have been really comical.. My favorie line was..


Mike Newton.

I was partnered with Mike. Oh god, Edward’s gonna kill someone. Probably him…


Haha I know it would have crossed Edwards mind to kill Mike with all his Bella filled thoughts

Update Soon
Lady Skye 1992
2008-05-03 . chapter 6
great chapter.
love the "oh shut it, preggo boy!" part
my little brother actually read it out loud while i was searching for a song on my iPod. >.< haha, so funny. then i had to explain it all to him...haha.
Sarahbethgohome
2008-05-02 . chapter 5
hey this is pretty good but i think Bella is a little OOC and i am just suggesting that Edward conteract the jokes instead of getting made about them
Kasey Elizabeth
2008-04-29 . chapter 5
I love how you teasing Edward so much...but I don't like Bella seeing Jake.
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