 Kirsty-Cullen 2009-12-15 . chapter 6haha i loved it pleasse continue its so funny XD |
 Captainimpalerrox 2009-12-09 . chapter 4Juno is the best!
"Dude, your baby looks like a squirrel!"
"Hey! At least my stomach has something useful in it, whereas yours is filled with Taco Bell!" |
 Blood and Roses230 2009-12-03 . chapter 6hurry up with chapter 7 please |
 Pudding-Chan 2008-10-22 . chapter 6I love it, lol, Please update soon! |
 Dellicantica 2008-08-20 . chapter 6i like it |
 killer kim 2008-06-17 . chapter 6i like it alot and really liked it when u called edward prego boy lol |
 La tua Cantante101 2008-05-21 . chapter 4U-P-D-A-T-E! I'm actually reviewing 4 chp. 6, cuz the other person on the account already did 4&5, but seriously, chp. 6 was a little plotless, but i do like the story. I want to see more drama, though, but this story is really good otherwise. |
 Eldrvarya Hljodhrc 2008-05-09 . chapter 6Ehh... If Rosalie is the one with the miscarriage, then why can't Bella be the one with the affair? Tell Mike it's his, but it's actually Edward's? Even though Edward is her boyfriend already... Ignore that fact!
Funny story, I love it. |
 InnocentXxXLies 2008-05-04 . chapter 6DARN YOU AND YOUR SHORT CHAPTERNESS!
This was a good chapter from a great writer...
UPDATE SOON!
~Ivey~ |
 SkullGirlXOXO 2008-05-03 . chapter 6rofl
through the entire story loved it
keep up the good work |
 Eternal Night 2008 2008-05-03 . chapter 2Tisk Tisk to Mike he has no chance and he still cannot give her up and my favorite line was
He turned away and mumbled something. Now, I don’t have Edward’s super hearing, but I swear he said, “Not yet.”
Like I said...
I think (if you haven't ended the baby project yet anyway) that you should have the assignment that they have to go to the others house or/and that they have to do something nice for their partner. MIke would love(!) those since Bella would have to go to his house and he prob would take her on a date for his doing something nice for Bella.Anyways great work and update soon please |
 Eternal Night 2008 2008-05-03 . chapter 1Holy Crap funny! I loved it but you should have made Jasper and Aloce have differeny partners hehe that would have been really comical.. My favorie line was..
Mike Newton.
I was partnered with Mike. Oh god, Edward’s gonna kill someone. Probably him…
Haha I know it would have crossed Edwards mind to kill Mike with all his Bella filled thoughts
Update Soon |
 Lady Skye 1992 2008-05-03 . chapter 6great chapter.
love the "oh shut it, preggo boy!" part
my little brother actually read it out loud while i was searching for a song on my iPod. >.< haha, so funny. then i had to explain it all to him...haha. |
 Sarahbethgohome 2008-05-02 . chapter 5hey this is pretty good but i think Bella is a little OOC and i am just suggesting that Edward conteract the jokes instead of getting made about them |
 Kasey Elizabeth 2008-04-29 . chapter 5I love how you teasing Edward so much...but I don't like Bella seeing Jake. |