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Reviews For: Not So Alone

Haruka-Hime
2008-07-01
ch 1,
abuseGreat oneshot. One of the things you wrote that I liked best was the way she didn't want to be with Hiei because he was the only one she could touch.
Dark Fox 14
2008-05-19
ch 1,
abuseLol, it always seems that most of the crossover stories with Inuyasha on anime X-overs are IYxYYH =3 with either Kag/Hiei or Kag/Kurama(Youko)
bookworm182
2008-05-09
ch 1,
abuseaw thats so cute!
MistressKiraNova
2008-01-20
ch 1,
abuseAw so cute!

You should do a sequal!

Kira Nova
KagHieiLuver
2008-01-19
ch 1,
abusethat was...awesome!
zoey tamagachi
2008-01-19
ch 1,
abusemy god your stories rock ppl should read all of your stories coz i like them a lot hehe i can seem to stop reading Help of the Heart' Shadows of the Night' She Appeared' The War of All Wars' Steady Flow' To Win The Heart of a Thief mostly all of your stories and yet no one has review'd your story the end its a great story and Itachi even likes it oh the pain of no reviews of the end

Itachi: overDramatice much?
evilanimeprincess121
2008-01-19
ch 1,
abusehahaha ,

i like it : )
Mya Uzo
2008-01-18
ch 1,
abuseaww poor youko-kun
SesshoumaruKougaNarakuFanGi...
2008-01-18
ch 1,
abuseAww, I like this one!
Evil RULZ
2008-01-18
ch 1,
abusei love it i love it i love it i love it so much and man i just love it. its so cute and i cant help but say i LOVE IT :)
samurai-heart-forever
2008-01-17
ch 1,
abuseCUTENESS! YAY!!
madmiko
2008-01-17
ch 1,
abuseReally, really nice!! Great premise for the story, -- that was a pretty wicked curse Naraku laid on her. It effectively knocked Inuyasha out of her life.

Interesting use of the "ancient language of kitsunes." It made perfect sense that she would have learned it in order to help keep Shippou safe. Nice touch. ^_^

I hardly ever see Yusuke referred to as a Taiyoukai-class demon, -- I like it.

One of the things I liked best was the way she didn't want to be with Hiei simply because he was the only on she COULD be with. For you to mention that was a masterful touch. She didn't want her love to be a false love. So, they merely fought, over and over, until he stopped coming around. That, of course, gave her, and him, time to think about what their real feelings were. Hiei's declaration to her was very nicely done.

This was SO very wonderful, and I thank you so much for writing it as a thank you for the 100th review on one of your other stories. It really feels like I won a prize!! ^_^ YAY!!
WhiteDemoness11
2008-01-17
ch 1,
abuse*blink*
*jaw drop*

*applauds* Wow. Just wow. Sexy, heart wrenching and one hell of a one shot!!
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