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| pigtopus 2008-03-27 ch 1,  | abuseNana and Hachi would be better together (: I like this story. |
| Vanya Starwind 2008-03-22 ch 1, | abuseWow. Really great, but I'd love to see a continuation to where Nana actually moves on her dreams. The shortness of what Ren does could be adjusted. Even though she has her mind on Hachi, she should still respond more to him. Overall, though, it's great. |
| Danielle 2008-03-14 ch 1, anon. | abuseawesome! i been looking for something like this and i finally found it!...more? |
| jo821 2008-02-12 ch 1, | abuseloved it. it's very canon and plausible, and I think you wrote Nana's love for Hachi and her...something for Ren (lol) really well :) x |
| SickDeath 2008-02-05 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful and bittersweet. In my favs. |