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| RoxxiSanders 2008-02-18 ch 1, | abuseI loved it, especially this bit... 'She realized then that perhaps romance wasn’t all about the stereotypical things. Truly, she loved him just the way he was. He was no Romeo, but he was hers. Noting her lapse into silence, Danny poked her back lightly. “Well?” he urged. Where they were now was perfect, she decided. She didn’t want anything to change. All she had ever wanted had been right here all along. “I want this to last,” she murmured quietly.' You got it exactly right and it was such a sweet story. loved Danny trying to reassure her too, it was very sweet. Fab story, definately a fave. Luff and hugs RoxxiSanders |
| nyakattia 2008-01-19 ch 1, | abuseSee, this is exactly what we need for Danny and Lindsay right now. I just like the idea of this- it's easy to get busy, to make assumptions about relationships- and thats how they fall apart. I really got into Lindsay's head here, the worry over her relationship, and I liked Danny's reaction. (Being a male, he's just a little more dense about these things :P) Well done, and I hope more will follow! |
| dl-shipper34 2008-01-18 ch 1, | abuse*giggles insanely* *breathes* Bo, that was so amazing! It brought a smile to my face along with some giggles and "aw!" I especially loved this part: “You’re in my heart.” His voice was barely above a whisper. Gave me the warm fuzzies, it did! I was delighted to check my mail and see this alert :) *snuggles her Bobo* This story rocks. And so do you :D |
| wjobsessed 2008-01-18 ch 1, | abuseWow! Another great Boleyn DL story! I can't think how you could've made this any better. Thanks :) |
| prplerayne 2008-01-18 ch 1, | abuseThis is the edited version huh? Me like!! You actually made me, who's plot bunny is about as fluffy as a cactus, giggle, squee and aww throughout the whole thing! Great job!! |
| Brinchen86 2008-01-18 ch 1, | abuseThis was so great! Thanks for posting it, I really love it! |
| nikki.02 2008-01-18 ch 1, | abuseWow! Another great story from you! I love it how you used their physicality to describe their emotions; new and original, and it sounds amazing, as always! |
| gwen24 2008-01-18 ch 1, | abusegreat story, i loved it. ;) |
| mercy4vr 2008-01-17 ch 1, | abuseBo! This was the edited version? You should consider posting the other version, too... 'cause, damn! Whew! The last paragraphs almost made me (the non-crier) cry. Just very... right |
| Yemam2422 2008-01-17 ch 1, | abuseYay! You finished! I did a strange squee-jump combination in my chair just seeing the alert so I knew I would love it. The way the show has been going it does seem like D/L have lost a little of their usual spark so I love that your story addresses the natural way a strong relationship evolves from a white hot spark to a slow, steady burn. And when that happens, I like to think that nothing can get in between Danny and Lindsay indeed. I loved the country girl vs. city boy approaches to the trip - very cute and funny! Lindsay's insecurities were so real and honest - your wrote that really well. It was as if it was their first time together all over again. This 'new' first time was a nice contrast to their real first time on Snow Day on the pool table. Sure, a pool table is fun and sexy but the fact that they could rediscover that spark and connection - and then go even deeper - with not much but wildnerness and a secluded cabin makes their bond all the more special. Finally, Danny is definitely not the hearts and flowers type but in my world (or my perception of Danny's world) "Because I am. Committed." equals "Because I am. In love with you." ;) Wonderful! Keep writing!! |
| mel60 2008-01-17 ch 1, | abuseThis is so adorable and much needed. I always love the way you write Lindsay. I can't really put my finger on it, but she always seems different coming from you. She's more positive and less angsty, I guess, but that seems like I'm trivializing it. It's deeper than that - but regardless, you do an amazing job with her. |
| Emily Rae 2008-01-17 ch 1, | abuseThis was so tender, and so passionate. I just fell in love with it, and I'm glad to see a new one-shot from you. Definitely a good piece to read, probably one of my favorites now. A little bit of smut with all that great fluff. And I'm happy that you had a balance between the good and the bad of their relationship, to show that every couple has some insecurities. Bravo! |
| CaRiNeSs 2008-01-17 ch 1, | abuseAww...how cute was that :) I hope they make it too! Great job!! |
| audaciousblonde 2008-01-17 ch 1, | abuseFirst off, welcome back to the wonderful world of fic writing. Second, what a way to come back! Simply awesome! I love how your writing allows my mind to soak up every moment and every little detail in this fic. This doesn't feel like fanfic simply because it seems so real as if it is actually taking place on the show itself as I read. Danny and Lindsay feel so natural, so real here. :D "She realized then that perhaps romance wasn’t all about the stereotypical things. Truly, she loved him just the way he was. He was no Romeo, but he was hers." This really does express exactly how I feel about the D/L relationship. Throw the rule book out the window, they've reinvented it. They simply love each other, and it's special just the way it is. I also love the smexy stuff too. It's definitely loving smexiness though. Love the 'fire in the pants' line. LOL. Well Done. ~Auda~ :) |
| laurzz 2008-01-17 ch 1, | abuseI'm in awe. That was just. wow. I can't actually conjure up any words at how perfect that was for reflecting their relationship. Bravo!:) |