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| wallflower23 2008-05-11 ch 1, | abuseI just love this story! I like this version of OZ so much better than the original (which is something you don't hear that often). |
| unicornfaye 2008-02-24 ch 1, | abuseThis was wonderful. I was wondering when someone was going to have Adora come back and be with Cain. Please write more! |
| DarqueQueen7 2008-01-20 ch 1, | abuseGREAT STORY! Man - what FUN to read! Two BIG thumbs up!! D! |
| Harm Marie 2008-01-18 ch 1, | abuseVery good and very sweet. I love happy endings. |
| Gamine Madcap 2008-01-18 ch 1, | abuseWow. That was freakin' awesome! I was raised by the hickory switch myself, so I know all about the trials by fire (or rather the pain of the backside). Never underestimate the power of the daddy...although it was my mama we were scared of. Anywho, keep up the great work! Love to see more of Jax later. And kudos for being the first person I've even seen be brave enough to bring back Adora! Yay! |
| CainDGfan 2008-01-18 ch 1, anon. | abuseInteresting twist on the story, but somewhat incomplete without an explanation of who was in Adora's grave and why Jeb never mentioned his mother being pregnant and going missing. Also, Adora was blonde in the holo. What you may want to consider in order to get reviews is not putting it under DG and Cain but instead Cain and Jeb or just Cain. Most people looking for DG and Cain stories are shippers (as I am). Just a thought. |