Haha, that was great. The whole situation with the crossword puzzle...It's great that you made him this kind of sardonic character. Great job!

Love, Maggie

ee! Love this story! Makes me even more certain you should continue with the other one (is the girl in the oter one mystique?) heh, lovely, lovely writing, almost a thriller in places and refreshingly good. Especially as it's quite short, you manage to draw the reader in very quickly and deliver a lot of power.

=D

COCONUT! :0

This is really well written. :3 Thanks for sharing it.

UBER good beginning! I really hope you continue this!

that is a really good question...let me think
a seven letter word for a tropical fruit...hm...could it be acerola

Delightful, but you haven't updated the old stuff. (Neither have I, but that's neither here nor there)