I just finished everything that is up so far, and I thinks its awesome, so intruiging. I hope you will continue it soon!

Great chapter. Please update soon.

omg I never expected that. Great chapter. I cant wait to read what happens next, please update soon.

Great chapter, cant wait to read the rest.

Great story!! Love it!! Please update soon!

omg i love your story! please post soon! but if you can't i understand because of the new book coming out!
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Great attention to detail. I had a movie in my head. I especially love Edward's response at the end. It gave me goosebumps.

Aww poor Jake. Great chapter, please update soon I cant wait for the next chapter.

Whoa what a cliffhanger. keep it going.

great chapter but imnot sure i like that carlise is the reason that those monsters are powerful but i guess it would be helful cause he would know how to break them

I am -so- interested to see what you have up your sleeve with this one :) But I love the atmosphere you've created in the teaming up with enemies thing. It's really interesting and i can see fun to play with. I also am very intrigued how bold the idea of killing some people in the battle and the fact that everyone actually realizes it, including bella. I look forward to whats going to happen with that as well.
Update soon!
-Graciella

I feel sorry for jacob. Great chapter, cnat wait for the next one. Please update soon.

I really adore this story. I can hear the characters in my head. And now you have my salivating over Carlisle's confession. More now please!

Holy Crow! I just finished chapter 15 after reading most of the others throughout the week and I am so impressed. I have to say that I entertain this scenario as a possibility for BD, and I like the way that you have played that out. I'm also glad to see the air between the wolves and the vamps is somewhat clearer-at least they all have a sense of humor.

Anyways, well done you. I hope that you update soon, because I can't wait to hear the confession!

Great chapter! I love the banter between the two groups! Great writing skills!