Woah...

...freaky.

Wow I wouldn't want to meet him in a dark alley.
Good job. Love the style it's written in.
Please update son.

Dark. Creepy. Made me shiver. And I loved it.

=)

Wonderful writing darling. I'll be sure to check out the rest of your stuff when I'm not so tired.

Sincerely,

Ms.WritingFantasy

Very dark and nice. Great title and last sentence!

wtf is up with all the tom storys there all freaking creepy no one likes tom his a creepy bastered when ginnys lying on the ground she loves harry not tom its just freaking retarded sorry if i seem harsh

You gave me shivers. =) Creepy. Subtle. Nice.

very good.

I love this story. I can't find any more like it. You know ones where voldy is having non consenual sex with a first or second year (maybe third year) Harry. You should make more chapters. The next one should be like inishing this one.

... 0.o Dang... The story was good... >.> And it just BEGS for more... ^^; But that's all I can say without mentioning how freaking dark it was!

Wow, you are a *really* good writer. I loved it.