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CagalliRules
2009-01-08 . chapter 4
Update! :]
shiloah18
2008-12-28 . chapter 4
nyWeiZ, suteki deshou chap! and gomen for taking so Long to review.. >._
shiloah18
2008-12-28 . chapter 4
hmm.. if there are such things as Light and Dark vampires.. why won't CagaLLi teLL? -_^

ah.. swEet AsuCaga.. *sighs* ^^

Cags traveLLing as a hunter eh? lol reminds me of Gon's otou-sama in HunterxHunter.. XD

"He aLso feLt the same he didn’t want to gambLe CagaLLi Life to see if his father wouLd approve when he was certain he wouLdn’t." and yet, he proposed about teLLing his otou-sama and Kira about their LiL' secret.. >_<

*sighs* Patrick's bLinded by his hate for hunters to sEe that CagaLLi reaLLy Loves his son, Athrun.. :(

a Like it when Athrun's seLfish when it comes to CagaLLi.. xp

“I am sorry CagaLLi,” he whispered now with two Long K nine teeth. K nine? canine?

"But the most important thing was that they couLd be together forever now without worrying about peopLe stopping them by kiLLing the one they Love." wouLd it be the same if Kira finds out?

"Now they couLd Love each other freeLy without having to hide." they shouLd stiLL be carefuL of Kira.. >_<

nyWeiZ, suteki deshou fic! and gomen for taking so Long to review.. >._
taylaacheer7
2008-12-19 . chapter 4
aww so cute!! i love this story!
@karisse@
2008-12-18 . chapter 4
Gee! I love this fic! Please continue to unleash your ideas regarding Athrun and Cagalli!

Thanks and God bless! :D
ShinRa
2008-06-21 . chapter 3
New reader there.

I like how your story is going, however, the last part of Patrick has me worried.

Before I decide to continue reading, I just wondering how you will make the Patrick/Athrun relationship?
- A: making Patrick a unloving, uncaring, and mean father to Athrun?
- B: making Patrick a loving, caring, and nice father to Athrun?
- C: making it to B, but Patrick gets killed off the story?

I'm a fan of Patrick and Athrun Zala, and I love it if people write "B", which very rare to find. When I do find them, most writers kill Patrick off. Most writers I find does "A" which I actully getting tireg of.

I hope you do a warning note to let me know, so I can decide to continue reading. So update soon.
cottongreentea
2008-06-04 . chapter 3
*jaws dropped* Lenore could've countered Patrick with the "But our son is part human. What do you say about that?" Unless their both vampires and Athrun just happened to turn out half human?

OMG! I love the lunch scene! They look so cute together! I can picture it! And the way to twist each other's words! Incredible! Makes me wish i had a boyfriend like that. Too bad now a days, all men look scrony and weak. What ever happened to the washboard abs!?
animegirl115
2008-05-29 . chapter 2
great chapi
AsuCagafan
2008-05-26 . chapter 3
Oh...so both Kira and Cagalli are hunters. It kinda sounds mean that Kira would also kill the good ones. But I guess I can't really blame him for what happened to their 'rents. I guess Patrick's really like his usual self. Always against the other side. But hey, it wouldn't be interesting if he wasn't. Okay, enough about that. For this chapter, it ain't bad. And it's getting interesting too. XD So update again!
AsuCaga01
2008-05-25 . chapter 3
Can you describe Ryu more,hehe...well,nice chapter...as usual,update...^_^
shiloah18
2008-05-25 . chapter 3
hmm.. Kira sounds Like Athrun in GS.. y'know.. something Like kiLLing naturaLs 'cause he knew that they kiLLed his okaa-san.. demo, Kira here is way diFferent than Athrun in the show since he even kiLLs the gOod vampires.. -_-

foLk? fork? -_^

who was the vampire then? between Lenore and Patrick?

oh.. is Kira an Athha?

nyWeiZ, Ryu? an OC?

suteki update! jaa ne in your next one! ;3
FadingxAmaranthx
2008-05-25 . chapter 3
It's not a bad story line, but I think you should get a reader so they can look over your writing and correct something that may not make sense. That's the only problem I have with this.
Believe me though, I think this is a very good story you have going.
Now I'm off to read your other story that has interested me.
Hee hee. :]
AsuCagafan
2008-05-20 . chapter 2
Now, who could that watcher be? Athrun's such a pervert...but men are really born that way...(sighs). I like this story a lot. You really know how to make such great AxC stories :D So, can you please update again? This is so nice! XD
Dark In The Eyes
2008-05-20 . chapter 2
thanls for updating I was afriad you were just going to leave the story like that. It was alittle boring but it doesnt matter beacsue I know you had to do that so you can set up to make it intresting. Update soon
shiloah18
2008-05-20 . chapter 2
lol anything with the word "swEet" huh? XD

Losing the guards? oh.. his famiLy of vampires don't know his reLationship with Cags, don't they?

hmm.. don't vampires Like it when it's straight from the neck? *chuckLes* oh weLL.. it's a gOod thing Athrun can controL himseLf.. ^^

I wonder how Athrun pays for his tuition fEes when his famiLy doesn't know that he goes to the schOoL of mortaLs.. hmm..

oh.. so Athrun's friend who works in a hospitaL is NicoL eh? is he a vampire tOo?

Ooh.. man in bLack eh? *giggLes* I wonder who that was.. Rau? *shrugs*

nyWeiZ, suteki update! ^ ^ and AsuCaga xure are swEet! ^_^ btw, beLated Happy Birthday to KiraCaga! jaa ne in your next post! ;3
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