aww so sad!
great one shot

I'm doubly glad you've just reviewed a story of mine else I'd have missed that story of yours. And it should really have got more reviews. It's extremely original and I like your sober intense style. The cerulean jumper is almost nightmarish in its oddity - the sort of jarring vision a tormented mind might well conceive! Well done, really.

So sad
i really liked it

One of the one shots I ever read.