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| Ithilian 2008-01-19 ch 1, | abuseSo he was thinking of ... Ianto? I'm a little confused. How does it have anything to do with him if his own men shot the real jack down? other than that I liked it. |
| Ivy3 2008-01-19 ch 1, | abuseOuch angsty. I'm glad there were consequences to that dance and kiss and that it wasn't just glossed over. Though being killed by your own men is horrible and Jack's guilt is probably overwhelming. Kinda dark and sad, but done well. |
| NearlyHeadlessNic 2008-01-18 ch 1, | abuseWell written :) Does it imply he's thinking about John? NHNIc x |