|Reviews for Chronicles of Klaw Island|
| jakeroo123 7/26/11 . chapter 7
Inspiration for his name came from a bribe to a landlord. No, I am not kidding.
Mario and Luigi are also much faster than any normal animal... Faster than any car, even the fastest racecar, actually.
| HikariFighter 5/6/10 . chapter 14
This is actually really good. I wonder, are you planing to continue? After a nine months long hiatus, I would've given up on it... :S
Anywhoo, if you do continue, you have my support and reviews! So keep up the good work, mate )
| Feather32 1/24/10 . chapter 14
I love this fanfic to. Its awesome. :)
| Aeolian Mode 7/27/09 . chapter 13
I'm glad I subscribed to this story, because you know what? I saw this notification in my mail box and... I remembered.
I remembered I haven't finished MY story yet! D:
My mind just oozed out of my ears one day and I just... forgot!
I'll try to update it! I have a VERY bad memory. :( Thanks for reminding me. And I'll get to reading this soon.
| ELIZABETH 7/8/09 . chapter 12
this story is awsome ! I LOVE IT I HAVE BEEN DRAWING SCENES FROM THIS STORY mabye you should make it longer .
| Poohbear98366 4/18/08 . chapter 12
Absolutely AMAZING story. I was on the edge of my chair the entire time I was reading. Good job. I am impressed.
| Zefri012 4/2/08 . chapter 12
Pretty nice story you've made here. Not as bad a title as you think. However, the updates were painfully long and, I'm afraid to say, dissapointingly short.
Additional: What happened to Sukari and the Galshion? Some of this was, admittedly, rather rushed.
But still, you've got decent work going on. I might flip through your other stories if I have time, the world won't hand itself over to me!
| Nicktendo Squad 4/1/08 . chapter 12
I think 'Home Is Where The Heart Is' title works fine with this story. By the way, it was AWESOME!
| Aeolian Mode 4/1/08 . chapter 12
...you're not ending it there are you?
There's still unanswered questions! A lot of people write REALLY good stories and butcher them with terrible endings. Not to say that chapter was terrible- in fact, it was extremely well written, you used a lot of elloquent words and vivid imagery, but... you didn't answer a whole lot of lingering mysteries.
Don't end it here... please? What about Princess Peach, or Clare?
And I retitle things sometimes myself, and I like that 'home is where the heart is' theme better the 'missing', so, do what you think you should.
Anyway, as usual, beautifully written... please continue?
| gonewriting 3/31/08 . chapter 12
The ending was good, I must say. I think the title is fine the way it is. If you think about it, with the whole, 'home is where the heart is' thing, then missing could be like them missing home or their home missing them.
One-shots would be nice! Like Mario and Luigi returning to Klaw Island, maybe?
| ohtar 3/23/08 . chapter 11
i think you may need some more of those 1up mushrooms. im gonna die of insanity before the next chapter gets here! 0.o
| Nicktendo Squad 3/8/08 . chapter 11
Poor Mario. I hope Luigi will be ok too. UPDATE SOON!
| Aeolian Mode 3/8/08 . chapter 11
You need to use something to seperate scenes, I kept seeing things jump from Mario to Luigi with nothing seperating one from the other, you know?
You're revealing a lot more in this chapter, and hopefully everything will come crystal clear soon.
I'm wondering who this Clare person is and where she's from, and how she knew who Luigi was. Or is she another one of your galshions?
| gonewriting 3/7/08 . chapter 11
interesting chapter... I'll be curious to see who Clare really is. btw, what's a galshion? are they like shapeshifters? I really like where this story's headed. keep it up!
| Zefri012 2/24/08 . chapter 1
Worst joke evur
Set them on fire and say "You're fired"?
aside from that, all fine.
Additional: Why do you and Aeolian keep making Luigi get hurt?