Loved the fight scenes. Laura was a wee bit out of character, but pretty close. The spine thing was awesome, hats off to you!

My God! This was absolutely GRUESOME -- and absolutely Awesome!

I really liked this. Very descriptive and detailed. Daken is a nasty little thing isn't he?

Daken is as sickening as in canon. I hope he'd learn at least something from the harsh leson Laura gave him.

That was awesome. I'm glad somebody wrote this. They where close enough in character. I hope you write more.

Wow, amazing job. Kinda twisted, but that's to be expected. The details painted a gory picture, but it was an incredible one. And honestly, I think you did an awesome job with Laura. It felt very in character, though I'm probably not the best judge. I'd almost ask for more, but I know better.

Again, amazing.

~Missi

Very interesting. I enjoyed this FanFic very much.