This was great. I love the metaphors you draw between the dragons and zuko, as well as Ursa's appearance.

Wow, what a great ending! I really love your writing, and you wrapped up the trilogy perfectly. It may seem repetitive, but I also love the Toko friendship- he's like the older brother she never had. Really sweet. You made the zutara much less forced than in other fics I've read, and I could see the whole thing in my head. Keep it up!

~z4e

PS I think this is the 100th review! Congratulations!

That was a really great series. I thoroughly enjoyed that.

Aw...the whole series is so sweet! Yay for Zutara!

Good story! But isn't Katara repulsed by bloodblending, and disgusted/ashamed that she can do it?

This is what 3.16 should have been. It was in my opinion the worst episode in the series because of the sudden OOC of two epic characters. The entire point of the episode was to make Katara forgive and accept Zuko, and without even endorsing a particular 'ship, Southern Raiders was lame.

Instead, it should have been like *this*, like your Western Air Temple stories: two warriors finding some common ground and an understanding, while sparks fly and they get past hurts and issues [mostly] out of their systems. I love everything about this mini-series, from your skill with prose (no wasted "gold eyes sizzled against blue blah blah" lines that distract from the story) to your addressing some of the deeper and more interesting facets of the characters. Well done.

The chore series should be real Avatar episodes. ou are a very good writer.

Liked it, I loved it. I especially liked the negotions for "practice" and the corner lip kiss, so cutesome. I also liked Ursa, she was there but not there there. Your writing just gets better and better with each fic of yours that I read, Brava.

Cute! Nice job, as usual!

These were great! I love them. ^_^

i spelt that wrong but i would like to say that i would love if you chose to write 'tomorow' for this fic. i know its a one of 3 set but please consider it?

That was just wonderful! (I'm too lazy to review for every fic, so I'll just write one big one for this one...)

Well, I loved all of your fics in the '3 Chores' series; they were very original, humorous, well-written, and completely realistic! Everyone seemed especially in-character, something that is a problem spot for most authors. And, in terms of originality, I've never read anything like it! It was also extemely funny, and always at the perfect moments, like the Toph/Zuko friendship.

You're writing quality is also wonderful! There were a few choppy sentences, but, overall, you're writing was lovely and flowed nicely. Though, I was a bit confused when you skipped time in 'Gathering'; it took me a while to realize that you had skipped forward to the next scene.

Zuko and Katara's bonding was also very realistic. It wasn't like other cheesey Zutara fics in which Katara suddenly glomps Zuko randomly; you showed how much she really hated him and how she slowly softened up on him. Though, I found the ending kiss was a bit out-of-character for the pair...

Overall, your story was a pleasure to read, and I hope you do write more fics at this writing quality!

Sayonara!
~randomlvr1

I did like it - it's brilliant like all your other stories!

Yay! Total awesomeness!

wow...
THERE SHOULD BE MORE! :(