well damn that was just amazing...i mean there really isnt another word to describe that, you better write more in this story lol cus wow...

Really, really well-written. I'm floored, and seriously need to know why Shizuru's gone. Keep it up.

i read the first chapter of the manga and hated it. but i kept on reading hoping to see the shiznat action... T_T i felt cheated somehow.

anyway, what's going on here?

Ah! It's here! Now I can finally keep track of it! I love everything about this story, so I'll wait for updates with the patience of a saint. ...Possibly. It's just- so good, and I'd write a coherent review if I weren't so happy- and besides, I've already reviewed this one, right? Though I might not have said enough on LJ... It's brilliant, being manga-verse, because after finally finishing it (the manga) I needed something to make that universe...non Tate-centric. ^^'
~Hoppy/Naolin/Arnavon

I already read this chapter so many time and I still waiting for an update.
"Shizuru was gone" with this end, I really want an update, to see what will happen next.
so please update soon. ^^b

Thank god I've never read the mai-hime manga but otome was funny XD

Really good ..I hope you update soon. I want to know why Shizuru left her.

F**K ! That was sad ! Explain yourself ! :( Why is she running ? :(




PS.
Seriously, nice written, even if it's damn angst. :)

Having never read the manga (and not ever planning to), I read this fanfic without it to relate to. So, having said this, I thought this was breathtakingly vivid.

The manga is a POS! This fic is way better, glad to see it's useful for fanfiction though. Great start and keep them coming.

i unfortunately -sigh- have read the manga since the anime was taking me so much time downloading -sigh- i was really mad when i read it sigh anyway is a really good fic ^^ and im with you, the manga is a really and maybe better way of usefulness to create AUs -i have one myself planned- xDD anyway is really good ^^ and even if it sad i will had grown tired too if i had been shizuru T.T anyway keep writing such wonderful work ^^

I really dislike the manga. But it's nice to see something different out in the fanfiction world. Do you plan on continuing? I hope so!
=]

Caramba XD
Ops xD I couldn't refrain myself here. It is just too sad. By the way I had the displeasure to read the manga XD
Poor Shizuru, and it was even before I knew the anime, but lucky me I knew already at least the story of the anime. XD

But poor Shizuru and Natsuki. I wonder what happened to have drive Shizuru to such a decision? ó.ò

Sheesh, I'm really curious to know. And I pray it'll have a happy end with the two together of course.

BTW when I read the manga it broke my heart to see Shizuru alone, without anyone to care for her. i.i

Well anyways it's quite interesting you fic. Update soon please.

I'm kinda curious about what made Shizuru finally decide to give up on Natsuki. Keeping my fingers crossed for an update and a happier ending for the couple. ^^

manga-verse, haven't seen a lot of these, but i welcome it! wow, this is very nicely written, love the detail and all the feelings that you portrayed. now i will wait for the next chapter and see what natsuki will do