Interesting story, but if you don't mind me saying so, I don't really feel like this ended well. Whenever clockwork interferes in Danny's life, even when it comes to Dark Dan, it's to teach him something. I feel like you set up this whole story having clockwork allow him to travel into his future, showing him that if he stuck with things the way they were (everyone knowing), his life would be that much better because of it. He's married to Sam, has a happy family, everything turned out fine. Giving Danny the choice at the end can be seen as clockwork's test, proving whether Danny has learned anything to this effect (and the writer's method of forcing a little character development into him ;) ). But having him still choose to change the past, even though it's barely been a week, seems like the most selfish thing he could have done... Anyway, rambling again. At least you kept the characters in character, which is more than most can say...

clap clap clap i love the story it was really cool

You know what? That was very much like the show. It seems exactly like the sort of movie/episode that would follow after Phantom Planet... Congratulations on a very well-done piece of fanfiction. Grammar mistakes aside, the plot was high quality stuff.

wow. i loved the ending. it was perfect. just the way danny would do it. well i guess this i it hu, it was great ride. and i was thrilled to be part of it. it was a geat chapter and a great story to bute. well I'm off. thanks for giveingus all a great enjoyment to have read. later dude

That was great! Throw in the catchy theme song here, a little THE END! Here, and Bada Boom! We got ourselves a great ending! Good job! As you can see, Artgirl4 is BACK! *takes her bow* I'm SO HAPPY to be back! Third story I've reviewed so far. I got home just a little while ago and jumped on my computer. Man I missed Fanfiction! I LOVED the ending! (and now it's probably my turn to end TRoV right?) I can't wait to review AM! Well I better continue reading. Great job again and can't wait to see your next idea!

Artgirl4

Yay! I think that was a good ending. I loved the way you brought Skulker in at the last - that was a very nice touch.

ahah, i loved this ending! what a great way to end it! Thank you! Amazing story!

-chris

Oh it was a great ending. Nice touch with him going back and not telling the world his secret. Sounds like someone didn't like how Phantom Planet ended...
Well, congrats on finishing! It was a very fun read :D

Well, you gave a good outcome for the idea of changing history so Danny would still keep his half-ghost status a secret. You said you wouldn't start anything big. What about AM?

aaww how corny and completely predictable!!
ahaha jk jk i liked it mhm i did
:) w00t

*Applauds the ending*. I, for one, enjoyed this story! And I like how you tweaked the end of PP, too! I liked that no one knows of Danny's secret. I think his life would be WORSE than a movie star with all the attention... Even telling Valerie was OK by me. I think it would make future stories interesting if she still hunted him, but she would probably find out sooner or later, anyhow about DF/DP. And don't apologize for the ending...it's YOUR story, after all! And I liked it! GREAT JOB! And I hope your hand gets better soon after the surgery!! truephan

It's a nice ending. I do think Valerie deserved to know the truth about Danny's half-ghost status.
Great story and I'll be sorry to see this go. T_T Oh well, nothing lasts...except for the stories that have been hanging around for years already 'cause the authors never update. Sound familiar to anyone?

I would like everyone to forget Danny's secret except, of course, Sam, Tucker, Jazz and his parents!! That's my vote. Nice chapter, by the way. I really think you hit Dan's personality on the head when you said he had 'soul-less blood red eyes'. I do think he is evil, but I also firmly believe that there is still some good in even the most evil of people and there's always a possibility that they could turn to good...look at Darth Vader...Vlad in TUE for one, er, two! So, even though I think Dan makes a most delicious villain for Danny, I think I would like to see Dan turn to good in the end...after all, half of him is shared by the Danny, and we know that is that SuperCool and very noble and good ghost-half. Hope your surgery goes well. I know you still have a couple of more weeks, but I still want it to go well. And I hope you get the opportunity to continue this story either before or after the surgery!! tayl truephan

dont make every one forget, please dont. i like it this way. ir\ts also more in dannys charaicter to not take the easy way out. bye the way the fighting part worked out beautifuly. and the plain was brinliont. really good and thoughtful. this was the best chapter out of a great stroy. the whole thing was wonderfuly writen. i really enjoyed this. im guessing that the last chpater is the last, right? well then it was a great run. i really loved the story. later dude

About this snowy future, why were they crowded?

If things are changed so the world minus Danny's parents forget Phantom Planet, will it mean the world will forget about Vlad being Plasmius as well? And will Valerie remember Danny's secret?

Personally I hope the world remembers but after these chapters I believe you can make the other way work as well.