 LilyFox 2009-11-12 . chapter 10The last chapter was hilarious! I love your characterization of Draco. It's spot on. |
 OpenAtTheClose 2009-11-02 . chapter 4I read the first 3 chapters on your LiveJournal after seeing a recommendation on "Coffee and Chocolate".I absaloutley adored them; you charectorize Draco and Astoria so amazing well; it's unbelieveable. I simply love this chapter too, and I cannot wait to read the next vignettes! |
 pinksummer909 2009-10-12 . chapter 10They should have a girl! I can imagine her being a 'daddy's little girl', so cute :) update soon! |
 opaque-girl 2009-10-03 . chapter 10Is this story complete and if it isnt, then is it gonna be updated? |
 Amehh. 2009-09-26 . chapter 10This is brilliant. I love the characterisation and the tone. Your moments of shade and light are so poignant. It's amazing. Keep writing. |
 MKofGod 2009-09-07 . chapter 10This is fantastic! My sides hurt from laughing so hard! I look forward to reading what happens next in the Malfoy household. |
 unwovenrainbow 2009-08-30 . chapter 6 Love the cigarette/pregnancy chapter. It's utterly adorable. |
 maybeknot 2009-08-26 . chapter 10I have a feeling that Draco and Seamus will end up friends. Anyway, great fic. |
 RahNee 2009-08-22 . chapter 10This is my first Draco/Astoria story to read, ever! I came by way of a rec at the Golden Seeker on LJ. This is a lovely story, and I'm looking forward to more. |
 ceirdwenfc 2009-08-21 . chapter 10This was lovely. Very funny and sweet. |
 ceirdwenfc 2009-08-21 . chapter 1This was lovely. I'm not sure why I like this pairing and the idea of Ernie losing the girl to Draco really bothers me (I love Ernie), but this story is really compelling. I'm looking forward to more.
All of your work is filled with a wonderful emotion and sense of timelessness. |
 err...anonymous? 2009-08-11 . chapter 10 My, this is lovely, and by far the best Draco/Astoria fic that I've read yet, I love the poetic way you write, yet your writing doesn't draw attention to itself and distract the reader from the story itself, and it's not at all awkward in present tense, unlike so many other fics I've read. Your characterization is quite realistic. Draco is convincing--mellowed yet prideful, and Astoria complements him quite well.
My only issue? The last update was AGES ago. Do update soon! |
 Jenefur 2009-07-29 . chapter 10 This is so good! Much better than any Astoria/Draco fanfiction I have yet to see! Please please don't stop it here, it needs to continue! |
 paper parasols 2009-07-29 . chapter 1I've read this before, but never bothered to review, -.- Draco's basically everything I thought he would be when he grew up, so right now, so all that's going through my mind is, WTF.
Yes, it's awesome, :DD |
 Kara 2009-07-27 . chapter 10 Aw this is so bloody awesome, your writing + humour = love.
Astoria's character, her wonderful handling of Draco, his vulnerability and pride, and all the the other characters that you've fleshed out...
Please continue this! |