Help
Home Just In Communities Forums Beta Readers Dictionary Search
Reviews for: Santa's Christmas Gift
stevielicous
2009-09-04 . chapter 1
koolness :D
a person
2009-08-06 . chapter 1
oops..as i was saying this is a good plot but it needs more emotion :) kay? bye!
a person
2009-08-06 . chapter 1
i agree with Crizz lover! this
Thoughts13
2009-06-20 . chapter 1
This review makes 9, next chapter please! I like your usage of petnames. cute.
Kay8abc
2009-05-09 . chapter 1
I definitely want more of this story, even if I have to come up with several aliases to get you to write it. I mean you can't end a story here, its just evil.
-Kate
momomago
2008-09-08 . chapter 1
I cry out loud that i want more!
somedorkynerd
2008-02-23 . chapter 1
great story. hope you continue. its cute
AnimeOtaku31821
2008-02-10 . chapter 1
*glances at clock* Ironic- here I am typing the 5th and final review needed during the 5 AM hour. Good start to a story, I can't wait to read the next chapter ^_^
ritax91
2008-02-08 . chapter 1
i really liked this fic, id like to see how u continue it ^.*
Crizzlover
2008-01-19 . chapter 1
i like the idea of the story, your writing however, sadly, because i don not want to offend you was a bit role playing text. it did not show real emotion that the characters may have been feeling. example, shego walked down the street, saw a cell phone, turned around. it just sounds stale and like a robot. also just a question, why do they have to be drunk in order to confess or tell anything with on another? i know inhibitions come out when your under the influence but still its just a bit over rated. but like i said liked the idea, where the story went. oh i would recommend reading a story by lunatic or pandabear. their writing may help you in capturing emotion. and just one question, do you role play?
*cries* please dont hate me *sniff sniff* just joking.
well tats
crimsonshrouds
2008-01-18 . chapter 1
I like this story and hope you continue
Becky Silver
2008-01-18 . chapter 1
Hey I like this...You had me laughing with Drakken believing in Santa *Laughs* I think it kinda needs a little more though but a good job none the less so yeah a bit more would be nice...I noticed a few other mistakes as well but I still got what they meant *Holds out plate with a piece of cake on it*
Hope to hear from you again soon!

*Sings to self*
Umm...I blame Dani!!
:: Hey!::
Hehe...It is you fault...
:: So?::
*Continues arguing with Dani*

Becky Silver Black
Return to Top