 stevielicous 2009-09-04 . chapter 1koolness :D |
 a person 2009-08-06 . chapter 1 oops..as i was saying this is a good plot but it needs more emotion :) kay? bye! |
 a person 2009-08-06 . chapter 1 i agree with Crizz lover! this |
 Thoughts13 2009-06-20 . chapter 1This review makes 9, next chapter please! I like your usage of petnames. cute. |
 Kay8abc 2009-05-09 . chapter 1I definitely want more of this story, even if I have to come up with several aliases to get you to write it. I mean you can't end a story here, its just evil.
-Kate |
 momomago 2008-09-08 . chapter 1I cry out loud that i want more! |
 somedorkynerd 2008-02-23 . chapter 1great story. hope you continue. its cute |
 AnimeOtaku31821 2008-02-10 . chapter 1*glances at clock* Ironic- here I am typing the 5th and final review needed during the 5 AM hour. Good start to a story, I can't wait to read the next chapter ^_^ |
 ritax91 2008-02-08 . chapter 1i really liked this fic, id like to see how u continue it ^.* |
 Crizzlover 2008-01-19 . chapter 1i like the idea of the story, your writing however, sadly, because i don not want to offend you was a bit role playing text. it did not show real emotion that the characters may have been feeling. example, shego walked down the street, saw a cell phone, turned around. it just sounds stale and like a robot. also just a question, why do they have to be drunk in order to confess or tell anything with on another? i know inhibitions come out when your under the influence but still its just a bit over rated. but like i said liked the idea, where the story went. oh i would recommend reading a story by lunatic or pandabear. their writing may help you in capturing emotion. and just one question, do you role play?
*cries* please dont hate me *sniff sniff* just joking.
well tats |
 crimsonshrouds 2008-01-18 . chapter 1I like this story and hope you continue |
 Becky Silver 2008-01-18 . chapter 1Hey I like this...You had me laughing with Drakken believing in Santa *Laughs* I think it kinda needs a little more though but a good job none the less so yeah a bit more would be nice...I noticed a few other mistakes as well but I still got what they meant *Holds out plate with a piece of cake on it*
Hope to hear from you again soon!
*Sings to self*
Umm...I blame Dani!!
:: Hey!::
Hehe...It is you fault...
:: So?::
*Continues arguing with Dani*
Becky Silver Black |