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| anon 2008-06-25 ch 5, anon. | abuseNO!! ENDING IS SO NAFF! ANABELL AND SHARKBOY!NEVER! EVER!SHARKBOY AND LAVAGIRL 4 EVER! NEVER EVEN BOTHER MAKING UP A NEW CHARACTER FOR SHARKBOY OR LAVAGIRL!NEVER!YOU HEAR ME? IT AINT EVER GONNA HAPPEN!NO WAY!soz just annoyed that sharkboy is not with lavagirl, please dont every have them with anyone else but each other it just doesnt work! LGXSB 4 ever |
| roudyredd 2008-03-06 ch 2, | abuseur sentences are a little choppy. but you'll get it over time. Good luck! REDD HEADS ROCK |
| roudyredd 2008-03-06 ch 1, | abuseyou need some more editing to it but so far really cool. I'm enjoying it! Keep it up. REDD HEADS ROCK |
| Ducklin 2008-01-26 ch 4, | abuseI really love it! Keep going! |
| Ducklin 2008-01-25 ch 3, | abuseI love it! When's the next one?! |
| Ducklin 2008-01-21 ch 2, | abuseI absolutely love the story! Especialy the part were Lavagirl tell's Anabell that Sharkboy's her boyfriend! But I really really like it! |