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| K O R T E N 2008-08-07 ch 1,  | abuseHAU! OMG I wanted to squeal really loudly while reading this, but I couldnt. D= This was amazingly perfect. Not at all OOC, perfect setting perfect expressions. I love the use of descrpitive words. I faved right away! |
| Sakura12 2008-05-25 ch 1, | abuseI dont understand... why was she crying? x Ashley |
| Shadow Kitsune67 2008-05-07 ch 1, | abuseAww that was a cute oneshot. . |
| smrt-cookie20 2008-04-10 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful, and very poetic. Short and Sweet :) |
| PinkYellowRoses2 2008-03-03 ch 1, | abuseaw so cute! Excellent description! ^_^ |
| JuuJuuLuff 2008-02-03 ch 1, | abuseThis was amazing. So well detailed, so well written. Not OCC at all! It was great, and it touched the heart. Great job! An awesome read! =D |
| BLUEMENTRIT 2008-02-03 ch 1, | abusekawai |
| Memeha 2008-02-02 ch 1, | abusei love it |
| Adelaide MacGregor 2008-01-23 ch 1, | abuseGood job on a short snapshot...could have had more info--as to why Riza was crying, but good none the less! Good luck! |
| 10tative 2008-01-19 ch 1, | abuseh! thx for da information! as soon as i read ur message, i check this story. ah, am so happy u wrote another love com fic :D luv ur writing style so much this one is beautifully well written. and no, i think its not ooc. its really just like otani and risa, when risa sad, its otani who cheered her up with his own way (kissed her and smirked with triumph --)very 'otanish' way, coz the 'chibi' got much spirit and confidence compared his body size LOL)though, it left me with more questions (such as what happen? why risa cried?), and more craving! u really have a way to intrigue reader, ne? LOL hope to read another story. best wishes for u ^_^ |