 WayLowHalo 2008-05-07 . chapter 1Haha, that's funny! I like it.
Tho, I think in the title and summary you must have meant "Rumpled" Bedding. Not rumbled. Just a tip.
"There’s only the odd scrap of clothing not spotted scarlet; those I just add in with mine. No reason for a second trip. Nothing sordid about that. Practical as always."
*grins* Those are probably my favorite lines! LOL! Very good job! So great! |
 Marzi 2008-01-25 . chapter 1Maybe is a ting of 'fiction luv, but it's amusing nonetheless. :) |
 DamagedGlory 2008-01-19 . chapter 1I really admire you for managing to put so much substance into something so short. Mrs. Lovett is so cute with her disdain for gossip. |
 Dark Works 2008-01-19 . chapter 1I really enjoyed this.
It was short, but it told so much, I thought.
Great descriptions as well.
-smiles-
Keep writing.! |
 squeakykiki 2008-01-19 . chapter 1Loved it! Very well written and SO in character!
The truth is often worse than fiction, eh? |
 niki-chan2 2008-01-19 . chapter 1I love this story. "No one ever questions where the Judge got a pretty little baby."
I love your writing!! |
 CardboardCreative 2008-01-19 . chapter 1Interesting- I was thinking of writing a fic based on the secretive relations of one Missus Lovett and her stoic Sweeney. You did a fantastically apt job with the narrative. Very scatterbrained, yet still on track. |
 Little Lemon 2008-01-19 . chapter 1Ohh,I like this alot! Kind of a new take on the story. Not like Mrs.Lovett would love for the gossip to be true, haha. |
 Shiro Ryuu 2008-01-19 . chapter 1Very lovely, my dear. "Nothing sordid about that"--I like that, considering that the truth makes the women's gossip seem downright innocent in comparison. |
 Katia 2008-01-19 . chapter 1 Loved it!! Usually I'm not one for the short one shots, but this was really nice, and very in character. |