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Reviews for: Rumpled Bedding
WayLowHalo
2008-05-07 . chapter 1
Haha, that's funny! I like it.

Tho, I think in the title and summary you must have meant "Rumpled" Bedding. Not rumbled. Just a tip.

"There’s only the odd scrap of clothing not spotted scarlet; those I just add in with mine. No reason for a second trip. Nothing sordid about that. Practical as always."

*grins* Those are probably my favorite lines! LOL! Very good job! So great!
Marzi
2008-01-25 . chapter 1
Maybe is a ting of 'fiction luv, but it's amusing nonetheless. :)
DamagedGlory
2008-01-19 . chapter 1
I really admire you for managing to put so much substance into something so short. Mrs. Lovett is so cute with her disdain for gossip.
Dark Works
2008-01-19 . chapter 1
I really enjoyed this.
It was short, but it told so much, I thought.
Great descriptions as well.
-smiles-
Keep writing.!
squeakykiki
2008-01-19 . chapter 1
Loved it! Very well written and SO in character!

The truth is often worse than fiction, eh?
niki-chan2
2008-01-19 . chapter 1
I love this story. "No one ever questions where the Judge got a pretty little baby."

I love your writing!!
CardboardCreative
2008-01-19 . chapter 1
Interesting- I was thinking of writing a fic based on the secretive relations of one Missus Lovett and her stoic Sweeney. You did a fantastically apt job with the narrative. Very scatterbrained, yet still on track.
Little Lemon
2008-01-19 . chapter 1
Ohh,I like this alot! Kind of a new take on the story. Not like Mrs.Lovett would love for the gossip to be true, haha.
Shiro Ryuu
2008-01-19 . chapter 1
Very lovely, my dear. "Nothing sordid about that"--I like that, considering that the truth makes the women's gossip seem downright innocent in comparison.
Katia
2008-01-19 . chapter 1
Loved it!! Usually I'm not one for the short one shots, but this was really nice, and very in character.
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