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PinkSugarBunny
2009-07-30 . chapter 8
Kwe I loved your story! You write really well, and you actually pay attention to spelling/grammar. Your plot was very well-reasoned. The last chapter (before the epilogue) was so cute! I felt so bad for Haku throughout the story; I couldn't wait for the reconciliation! And it's nice to find a fic in which they don't die young on the bridge. It's much nicer to imagine they had a life together. Zabu/Haku OTP!
x pink cloud x
2009-05-21 . chapter 8
I really liked it even if it had no lemon/lime ect. Great story. Epilogue almost made me cry.
Axel's Heaven
2008-11-20 . chapter 8
Dear Eva4Aikka

You have my eternal love beacause of this fic. Thanks for writing such a beautiful story. :) I have a major thing for happy endings so this was perfect for me. all though I always cry when I read something like this. I'm so sappy.

love:
Axel's Heaven
Axel's Heaven
2008-11-20 . chapter 1
I have to say this:
FUCK YOU!! This is horrible, horrible chapter!
I listened Matthew Good's "Weapon" while reading this, and cried. Okay, it means that you are genious, this is so beautiful, but still. I'm kinda jealous. I don't think I could write anything like this...

With love:
Axel's Heaven
Psycho4anime
2008-06-24 . chapter 8
So cute! it would have been nicer if it were a bit more umm... yaoi-licious, nut it was reallyy nice
LoserGoneWrong
2008-05-25 . chapter 8
aw, it was so sad!!
i loved it alot!
(espeically the ending song!)
I'll Be Your Lie
2008-05-11 . chapter 8
I loved it!
Cute!
Poor Haku!
This story is awsome!
Loveless Minji-chan
2008-05-03 . chapter 8
_O.O_ I didn't find any reason for you to rate this M
annaliesalayoshi
2008-04-25 . chapter 8
i wish you could have started with them in some sort of adulterated sceene either before or after they got back to the mist
i like the epilouge ending but it's just that you said there'll be yaoi...
annaliesalayoshi
2008-04-25 . chapter 7
really that end wasn't yaoi just to tell you
it shounen ai
i think that's spelled wrong...
but yaoi is when the homos have sex in the end so yeah...
but i really did like the story
just wished they actually 'did' some stuff in bed though
Tiger5913
2008-04-20 . chapter 3
=/ Poor Haku. Oi, Kakashi's technique instantly brought back memories of Zabuza and made Haku feel all sad again. >_> Hmm, surely Zabuza is affected by the absence too, right? Damn it, he can't truly be this heartless. How can he spend so much time with Haku and then just throw him aside at the end? I know that Zabuza treated the boy like a weapon for all these years, but... he should feel SOME kind of attachment to him. Maybe Zabuza needs one of Naruto's magical punches of awakening? Hm...
Tiger5913
2008-04-20 . chapter 2
Aw, that's sweet. :D Naruto is so kind to his friends. I'm glad Tsunade decided to give Haku a chance, despite his current status and everything. (Of course, I doubt she would be this lenient with the other missing-nins, but Haku is different, and I bet Naruto has no problem vouching on his behalf.) And Zabuza will soon realize he misses Haku and go looking for him, I'm sure, heh. DON'T WAIT TOO LONG NOW. D:
Tiger5913
2008-04-20 . chapter 1
...D: Whut. Zabuza just doesn't get it, huh? Haku has been with him all this time because he wants to stay by his side of his own volition. What the hell is with men, honestly? They have the sensitivity of a damn brick. >_> Oh, I'm sad that Haku actually left, but I know he would obey Zabuza's orders no matter what, even if it means breaking his own heart. *wibble*
black55widow
2008-03-18 . chapter 8
It is a good story but put yaoi in the summary and more romance, foreplay or even sex in the story would probably attract more reviews. It just needs a bit more zip or excitement.
I only say this because you requested it.
KalahariStorms
2008-01-29 . chapter 2
This sounds pretty interesting so far :)
Can't wait to see where it goes!
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