I think you should do more. It's almost poetic-if you know what I mean.

I especially liked your analogy of the Colby/Megan relationship, it's always fascinated me.

Good work!

Sque! Fluffandyumandoh!

aw, those were fab, i think each one should be explored in an ongoing story, each one a chapter, cos they were just fab!

loved this little story so don't give up writing, keep writing colby/megan stories for me to enjoy

thanks:)

This is excellent!

I'm not a Colby/Megan fan, but I still like these. You're doing a good job making the one sentence prompts meld together in a coherent story.

I think you should continue.

wow-i love these-couldn't stop smiling all the way through-plz write some more!

More!

Just great, i've always been a megan/colby fan!

not usually a megan/colby shipper but i thought it was great!

omg, this is amazing! please write more!