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| The-Resident 2008-08-28 ch 27,  | abuseOne of the better Slytherin Harry stories I've read. I'm eagerly looking forward to the future chapters. Keep up the great work. |
| EelvenGirl 2008-08-05 ch 27, | abuseIt's Remus isn't it? Ooh...Update again soon please!! |
| Owl344 2008-07-23 ch 16, | abuseQuestion: How do you know how many hits you got? Also, this is worth more than 20 reviews. It's a shame that all 120 didn't review, though I've been known to be guilty of the same crime. |
| Owl344 2008-07-23 ch 15, | abuseGood story--you've got nice spelling, nice grammar (sorry, that tends to be a large problem in fanfiction), nice plot and nice characters. It's not extraordinary, but really there are only two stories I can think of that are. |
| MissSiriusBlack-x 2008-07-15 ch 27, | abuseWowie, This is seriously a great story! (: You better update soon! |
| Mother of Tears 2008-07-11 ch 27, | abuseI've finally caught up on all your chapters and fervently wish there were more. This is one of the best Slytherin!Harry story I have found yet. |
| Mother of Tears 2008-07-10 ch 5, | abuseIngenious version of the Troll incident, having Harry save Snape's life. This is definitely a fascinating story. |
| Kammari 2008-07-05 ch 27, | abusegreat chapter i hope you update soon |
| MochaCocaFan 2008-06-29 ch 27, | abuseHumorous, witty, deep, adrenalin-inducing by turns. I can't wait to see more! |
| apathica 2008-06-27 ch 27, | abusei like your story! keep up the great work! |
| Kedava 2008-06-20 ch 4, | abuseIt started off good. And then this chapter just spoiled it for me. I'd point out exactly what threw me, but it may come out more than a little rude; so I'll say nothing and just agree to not agree. |
| papersoul 2008-06-16 ch 27, | abuseSo, I assume Voldie is the 'he' with the tea? Hm... what flavor does one serve to the Dark Lord? A nice respectable Earl Gray, perhaps? Possibly a soothing Chamomile? Maybe something nice and citrusy, to get the blood pumping... These sorts of questions deserve ANSWERS! Gracias, papersoul |
| Blue-Eyed-Snape 2008-06-13 ch 27, | abuseawsome story it kicks ass |
| japanese-jew 2008-06-10 ch 18, | abuseOh, so Rabastian was the cockstrangler? I'll confess: this review was mostly written so that I could use the word cockstrangler. Interesting, haven't seen young Tom Riddle win except in stories where he killed Harry. Regards, JJ |
| japanese-jew 2008-06-10 ch 14, | abuseI am fairly dissatisfied with this chapter for a few reasons. A. Your depiction of Hagrid reminds me of Edgar Allen Poe and Willa Cather's depictions of black people. Let's just say it's not as flattering as, oh, say Jason's impression of them in The Sound and the Fury. B. It's hard for me to imagine your Snape saying anything gently, even in this kind of a situation. If he felt like being kind, he would say that Mulciber was otherwise occupied, and it simply couldn't be him, and if he was in a hurry, he would probably snap it. You also improperly use the word allies in chapter six, but it's not as irritating as your Hagrid thing. Overall, I feel like you are progressing a little too quickly, but it is a fairly interesting read. I despise Malfoy, but other than that, eh. I suppose Ginny is back to her old job of cockstrangler, if Rabastian has croaked. Regards, JJ |