U don't have to claim that ur good at writing love scenes, cuz I do! That was awesome! A couple of grammatical errors here & there but nothing big, but the important thing is the story, & that was, like I said, awesome.

Great work.

Whoa, that was wild. I laughed at Tommy's "I really couldn't care less about movies now,"...great work, Diva!

Whew! Loved it girl... perfect mix of sweetness and steamyness. :D

And yes... the 5 y.o. in me giggled at 'manhood'. Sue me. LOL

great job! I loved it!

All the Katbashers must be poking out their eyes at this one :) Good, I hate Kat bashing.

Aw, such a great story. Such a tender moment. :D

No approval needed, that was fantastic girl! There's no one I trust more to write KaTo than you. Keep them coming.

Excellent!