You repeat yourself slightly, there are some mispellings, and you seem to go from present tense to past tense at the end. I dunno if you wanted it that way or what but talk about slightly annoying.

This is not a flame. Now I shall read the other fics in this 'Wish' arc of yours.

Ah that was cute, I've allways wanted to know about what it would be like if Seto saw an older Mokuba!

Keep up with ur awsome stories!

I'm glad he woke up in time.