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| Aphenphosmphobic 2008-02-11 ch 1,  | abuseThat was breathtaking. |
| TWNJ 2008-01-26 ch 1, | abuseNicely done. |
| uzukun7 2008-01-21 ch 1, | abusethat story was definitely good enough to be made ninto a multichaptered story. naruto was too blasee and sakura didnt take long to figure it out. that and maybe a couple of battles and instances where she couldve put her love for him as a test and this story wouldve been really really god. but in either case i enjoyed it and i hope you continue writing fics like this one. laterz |
| Karissa 2008-01-21 ch 1, anon. | abuseI really don't know what to say. I think that this was a really good story. My roommate's probably wondering what's wrong with me, since I'm smiling at my computer like a fool. I noticed a typo, I think you said you're instead of your, but that's about it. Thanks for a great story! |
| fauxPROJECT 2008-01-21 ch 1, | abuseI can't lie, when I first clicked on it, I thought it was going to be a bit..eh medicore. ;_; my god that was perfect! so kawaii! the drabble-esque style, and your flow was amazing between scene changes. (sometimes there can be some strange pauses.) :3 loved it! |
| Rasengan94 2008-01-21 ch 1, | abuseWhoa that was deep... but I like it... *thumbs up |
| ShadowAmaryllis 2008-01-20 ch 1, anon. | abuseLazy butt. Not logging in. Yar. I liked the story, despite not particularly liking NaruSaku. Nice job, thar. *smile* Very nicely depicted, the whole Sakura thing. You portrayed her very nicely, I think. Huzzah. Have a cookeh. :3 |
| MoD366 2008-01-20 ch 1, | abuseThere has to be something wrong with me... I'm an F'N 19 year old guy and I could melt when reading such a cute, fluff-filled story... Can anybody tell me if something's wrong with me or not? No? Well... then I just continue wih my review^^ The story was really good, I like reading fics showing how Sakura recognises she doesn't love Sasuke but Naruto. There are too many fics with Sakura loving Naruto from the beginning on the net... Well... just keep on writing such great fics and I'll keep reviewing, 'kay? That's a promise of a lifetime! |
| Cloud Ex-SOLDIER 2008-01-19 ch 1, | abuseNice oneshot. |
| Arch Zell 2008-01-19 ch 1, | abusetouching |