 selle18 2008-06-03 . chapter 1I love this so much. You capture Yankumi's denseness perfectly. And Shin is so patient with her! Great work. |
 shooting star 0160 2008-05-21 . chapter 1I love it! :D |
 SoreNoMiko 2008-05-09 . chapter 1awesome chapter
you developed their relationship quite nicely and subtly |
 xxkoffeexx 2008-03-30 . chapter 1*Sigh* This was absolutely lovely. ShinKumi is necessary and I'm so glad you wrote about their relationship after he leaves... This was written in interesting format (email!) and I like the story flow. Wonderful. |
 Eiai 2008-03-06 . chapter 1aww that is so cute! i like it. good job ^.^ |
 kanamearamhagiL 2008-03-02 . chapter 1aww complete...I like it even though I'd like to see more... I still like it very in character on both parts. two thumbs up |
 Marianielle 2008-01-20 . chapter 1haha... great story! =) |
 Poptate 2008-01-20 . chapter 1Really cute. It shows the dynamic between Yankumi and Sawada really well. And its realistic, meaning that this could happen. I look forward to more Shinkumi! |
 aya hineshi 2008-01-20 . chapter 1I like the story.short and sweet. =)
thank you. |
 Tsunami 2008-01-20 . chapter 1 Great ^_^ Loved it so much :) |
 renchu 2008-01-20 . chapter 1 this is very sweet very well writting, tough it took me 3 times reading it to understand the underline ^_^ my english is not that good *sigh* |
 Bellemaine Chercoeur 2008-01-19 . chapter 1Lovely, engaing and the tone was beuatiflly in keeping with the characters we know and love. I really like dhte idea that you included portions of their email contact, but not all of it, it flowed beautifully. Well Done! |
 GreenOnBlack 2008-01-19 . chapter 1very cute. keep at it. |
 Runadaemon 2008-01-19 . chapter 1Me likey. Thank you for writing. I didn't notice any bad punctuations that weren't there or not, so it's fine. heh. "It's like she's trying to sell me" |
 Keoi 2008-01-19 . chapter 1Aww what a cute story. The ending was kinda confusing though. |