I absolutely loved this piece of writing; wonderfully written.

You managed to portray Light very well taking all that's happened into consideration. Nice touch at the end with L's voice.

Really touching story. Made me think about what I would do in his situation. Keep up the good work with your writing.

hey i really loved it was really sweet

aw, soo sad. but it was really good. i now need to go read a happy fic...
Iri

Tear, tear. But there was no name on the headstone. Nothing at all. You used a little too much 'fucking's for it to be really serious and sad. Maybe you could edit some out. Otherwise, I really liked this. Favorites!

shit! i fucking hate you! you just made me fucking cry! AH!

not going to cry, not going to cry not going ot cry -crys- damn so sad >.< I hate it when I get emotional, good job though-snuffle snuffle-

AW! I love it! Nearly cried... XD

well, i really liked this, good job

despite the loads of angst, it was insanely cute and i LOVED that ending. i can picture it perfectly, so well done.

Oh so sad, I'm sitting here awake in the small hours and this was the last straw, just broke me up...

it wuz beautiful... cold and painfully true when it comes to those situations, not everthing ends in candy and rainbows. *sob* but it was sad and I wish Raito could hear L's voice, but great story *goes and cries in a corner*
(try not to swear too much, it takes the focus of the story, other than that AWESOME)

aw damn.i'm crying again.the end made me all choked up.i had to cry.i feel so emo.--sniffles--i hate reading about character deaths.they always make me sad.this was really good.i just can't seem to stop crying.if my best friend was here she'd probably slap me and call me emo and that i need to suck it up.--bitter laugh--SHE SO RIGHT.look at me! i'm ranting to a person that more than likely won't read this review because they find it to troublesome.and i'm still writing because i'm in my emo state and need to express my feelings without sobbing so damn much.i blame you.its your fault for making me cry.

So sad yet so beautiful.

OMG. That was BEAUTIFULLY written
It had me in tears near the end, my god that was so AMAZING.

that was pretty good. i think in the middle you rambled a bit too much, but the beggining and ending were great!

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