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Reviews For: The risk taker

teeeeeeg
2008-07-08
ch 2,
abuseI really enjoysed reading this story , its awsome.
It really is , i hope you update it soon .
It's a very intersting storyline, i guess :).
Well anywho , ill look forward to reading the new chapter when you update.

:)
An L.A. Woman's Ghost Song
2008-05-01
ch 2,
abuseI like it, update soon. =3
sinister haven
2008-04-27
ch 2,
abuseI have to say the story isn't slow. Your ability to guide a reader through the story is good. You let in little bits of info about the character as we still follow her through the present time. I can't say much more seeing as how you only have two chapters, but i definitely encourage you to write more!

Hope to read more soon! And I also hope this gives you more confidence in your story to keep writing.

~Stephanie
WildWestCowgirl
2008-03-06
ch 1,
abuseha ha! I really liked this! A very good take on that 6th person thing. Keep writing!
Confuzzled2011
2008-03-02
ch 2,
abuseI love this story. You should update it soon.
ForgottenStars
2008-02-26
ch 2,
abuseThere's another story on here entitled The Risk Taker. However, thus far its different. So it's all good.
Hopefully you continue with this. I want to see what you do different from the movie.

ForgottenStars
SBMFanatic
2008-02-25
ch 2,
abusewow.i like it
SBMFanatic
2008-02-22
ch 1,
abuse it.
BaMBaM13
2008-02-11
ch 1,
abuseawesome! update soon!!
iheartinuyasha169
2008-02-06
ch 1,
abuseplease update soon! i like this story! all though you should probably not make the story line the exact same from the movie. be creative!! ^_^
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