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| teeeeeeg 2008-07-08 ch 2, | abuseI really enjoysed reading this story , its awsome. It really is , i hope you update it soon . It's a very intersting storyline, i guess :). Well anywho , ill look forward to reading the new chapter when you update. :) |
| An L.A. Woman's Ghost Song 2008-05-01 ch 2, | abuseI like it, update soon. =3 |
| sinister haven 2008-04-27 ch 2, | abuseI have to say the story isn't slow. Your ability to guide a reader through the story is good. You let in little bits of info about the character as we still follow her through the present time. I can't say much more seeing as how you only have two chapters, but i definitely encourage you to write more! Hope to read more soon! And I also hope this gives you more confidence in your story to keep writing. ~Stephanie |
| WildWestCowgirl 2008-03-06 ch 1, | abuseha ha! I really liked this! A very good take on that 6th person thing. Keep writing! |
| Confuzzled2011 2008-03-02 ch 2, | abuseI love this story. You should update it soon. |
| ForgottenStars 2008-02-26 ch 2, | abuseThere's another story on here entitled The Risk Taker. However, thus far its different. So it's all good. Hopefully you continue with this. I want to see what you do different from the movie. ForgottenStars |
| SBMFanatic 2008-02-25 ch 2, | abusewow.i like it |
| SBMFanatic 2008-02-22 ch 1, | abuse it. |
| BaMBaM13 2008-02-11 ch 1, | abuseawesome! update soon!! |
| iheartinuyasha169 2008-02-06 ch 1, | abuseplease update soon! i like this story! all though you should probably not make the story line the exact same from the movie. be creative!! ^_^ |